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Khawhish e tark e talluq ki namoo kaise huvi

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Aik Taza Ghazal Pesh e KHidmat hai. Aapki raye aur tabsiroN ka muntazir
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Bahut khoob, waah waah

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MuHtarami
Mahtab Qadr SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki ghazal bahut hii khoobSoorat hei. Saare ashAar apne mafhoom ke liHaaz se qaabil-e-daad o teHseen heiN.

Is kaamyaab kaavish per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmayhiye.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

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mohtaram janab-e-Mehtab Qadr SaaHeb:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,

aap kee Ghazal bilashubah bohat dilkash hai. tamaam hee ashaar apnii jagah bohat ache heN.
meree jaanib se ek kaamyaab taKhleeq par dherooN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.

mamnoon-o-taalibe--dua'a

Zahida Raees :Raji:
Meree sha'iree se mujhe jaan Lo
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
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Mohatramee Abdullah Nazir sahib salaam o aadaab
Aap ki hausla afzai mere lye bayes e sharaf o imtiaaz hai. mai bahut mamnoon hoN aapka.
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Zaheda Raji sahiba salaam o aadaab

Aap ki adabi sarfarazee mere lye bayes e masarrat o itmenaan hai. mai bahut mashkoor hoN aapka.
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Mahtab Qadr Sahib,
Aadaab

"Muddat ke bAAd aap ko dekha Khooshee hoii."Waise to maiN Khood dou maheney Gaaiib rahaa magar aap tou bohat pahle se Gaaiib haiN. Chaaliye, 'der aayad durust aayad." BaRee Hasen Ghazal se nawazah hai aaj aap ne. Jisqadar Khubsurat kalam hai utni hi Khusurat kitabat. Zindabad.

Ummid hai ab nacheez se aap ki mulaqaat hoti rahegee. BadauN meN is baar khaSa taweel qayam rahaa jis dauran Ehsan SaHib se bhi mulaqaateN hoti rahtee theeN.

Khulooskaar,

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Jawaid Badauni Sahib
Adaaab o Tasleemat
"Muddat ke bAAd aap ko dekha Khooshee hoii." " phir shamma jal gai jo parhi thi bujhi huvi":)
Chaliye is se ye to pata chala ke aapbhi ghaib the, ab laut ke donoN hi agaye haiN to yaqeenan mulaqateiN raheiNgi
Aap ki ghazal ki pazeerai ki , aur kitabat ko bhi sarahaa , bahut mamnoon hoN aapka. shukria
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wah wah wahhhhhhhhhh baRi hi munfarid ghazal kahi hai aapne..kam ashaar magar sab jaandaar...ye kamaal aap hi kar sakte hain Mahtaab sahab....bahut khoob...sabhi sher apni jagah hain...dili daad pesh hai itni khoobsurat takhleeq pe... :)

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
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Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
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BHAI BAHUT KHOOB

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JANA SABHI SHER BAHUT ACHE HAI N
MATALA AOR MAQTA MUJE ZIYADAH ACHHA LAGA HAMEN BHI IS FUN SE NAWAZ DEN TAKEY HUM BHI KUCH KITABAT KARNA SEEK JAYEN
GHZAL CHOTEE HO LEKIN ACCHI HO AAPNE IS RAWAAYE KO BAR QARAR RAKKHA HAI
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shummu ji aapki behad khuloos bhari daad ne dil ko khushi bakhshi , aap salamat raheiN aur yoNhi dostoN ko daad se nawazte raheiN aur khushiaN bant te aur samieNt te raheiN. aameen
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Dr.Ehsan sahib aap ki daad ne hausla baksha , bhai urdu inpage software Jeddah se le laiN ya kisi se copy le laiN aur istemal kareiN aap bhi isi tarah ki images bana sakeiNge
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