UstadaoN aur MuntaKhib ShoAraa ki shaayeri
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syed bilal armaan
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by syed bilal armaan » Tue Feb 08, 2005 2:26 pm
App sab ka bahut bahut shukriya . app ne mere diye gaye unwan par kai bahtareen ashar likhe . is martaba ka unwan(topic) hai "SHABNAM".
is unwan par bhi app apne pasandida ashar bhejein. (-BILAL)
is se pahele ke SHABNAM se gul wazoo kar lein
chale bhi aao ke thoddi si guftaguu kar lein....
Shummu
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by Shummu » Tue Feb 08, 2005 4:26 pm
bahut khoob!
Jab bazm-e-mohabbat mein taqseem huaa aansoo
Phoolo.n ko mili shabnam aankhon ko milaa aansoo
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
syed bilal armaan
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by syed bilal armaan » Wed Feb 09, 2005 12:53 pm
wah sara sahiba bahut achha sher likha hai app ney.
ek sher aur mulaheza kijye..
saba,SHABNAM,shafaq,ruqsar-e-gul,mahetaab in sab ka
tumhara naam leta hoon tou kyoun chahera badalta hai.
Shummu
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by Shummu » Wed Feb 09, 2005 2:00 pm
Jis par hamaari aankh ne shabnam bichaayi raat bhar
Bheja vahi KaaGhaz tujhe us par likha kuch bhi nahi
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
tabasum
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by tabasum » Thu Feb 10, 2005 2:38 pm
hont'oun pey pachalta hua shabnam sa tabasum
masoom nigha'oun main zia khel rahi hai.....
Shummu
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by Shummu » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:19 am
Lagti hai chot dil par, aata hai yaad jis dum
Shabnam ke aansuon par kaliyon ka muskurana.
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani » Sat Feb 12, 2005 6:59 am
aNklhiyoN ke jharokhoN meN aaNsuuoN kii maalaa hai
shabnam ii sii palkoN par, motiiyoN kii jhaalaa hai
Hashmat Usmani
Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani » Sat Feb 12, 2005 1:26 pm
mere she'r ko pasand farmaane ka shukria. to, lijiiye ek aur she'r fil_badii irsaal-e-Khidmat kar rahaa huuN.
shabnam ke qatre aaye nazar bar daaman-e-gulaab
aisa laga ki jaise hoN tere vo honT laal, laal
Hashmat
Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique » Mon Feb 14, 2005 5:33 am
kabhi gul se shabnam Tapakte jo dekhi
mujhe qatra-e-chashm-e-tar yaad aaya
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
Shummu
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by Shummu » Tue Feb 15, 2005 12:59 pm
Maine Khushboo Kee Tarah Tujhko Kiya Hai Mehsoos,
Dil Ne Chheda Hai Teri Yaad Ko Shabnam Ki Tarah
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique » Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:14 am
kisee kee yaad meiN poNhache haiN ham iss aalam ko
suboo banaa diyaa gul ko, sharaab shabnam ko!
sarwar raz :)
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
Shummu
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by Shummu » Fri Feb 18, 2005 12:31 pm
Partav-e-khur se hai shabnam ko fana'a ki taaleem
maiN bhee hooN ik inaayat ki nazar hone tak
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique » Fri Feb 18, 2005 11:48 pm
Jab koii kale sehne gulistaaN meiN khili hai
Shabnam se meree aankhoN meiN tair gaee hai
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
fatimah
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by fatimah » Sat Feb 19, 2005 9:14 am
aslaam_u_alikam
shabnam jo miley khawahish_e_deryaa nahin kertey
hum had sey kabhi barh ker tamnaa nahin kertey
tabasum
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by tabasum » Sat Feb 19, 2005 11:33 am
jugnoo,shabnam,tare bankar meri ankhein dhoond rahi hain
aane wale tu hi bata dey mere humdam kaise hain......