Ek Ghazal Aur Sahi....

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Ek Ghazal Aur Sahi....

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Dear Friends in Urdubandhan,

Ek Ghazal aap sab ke liye... ummed hai pasand aayegi.

armaan
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MuHtarami
Munir arman Nasimi SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki ghazal Aam Taur per pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

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Beradaram Nazir Saheb,

Ye aap ki pur-kholoos hausla afzai hai ke main nayi nayi ghazal kehne ki 'inspiration' pata hoon. Mujhe yaqeen hai ke koi padhe ya na padhe aap jaroor meri ghazal ko padhenge aur islaah se nawazeinge.

aap ka apna

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Re: Ek Ghazal Aur Sahi....

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munir-armaan-nasimi wrote:Dear Friends in Urdubandhan,

Ek Ghazal aap sab ke liye... ummed hai pasand aayegi.

armaan
Azeezi Arman SaHab!
Aadaab

Aapki Gazal pasaNd aaii KhuSoosan aaKhree sher ne bohat mutAssir kiya. Daad qubool kijiye.

Sirf itna arz karne ki ijazat chahooNga keh matley meN misra.e Caane kuch cafaai chaahta hai. Is misrey meN alfaz ki tarteeb kuch munasib nahiN hai. Kuch aur kar ke dekhiye; masla" ghar meN bachche agar nahiN hotey...aise ghar m'otabar nahiN hotey.

Mera mashwarah Galat bhi ho sakta hai aap ka is se ittefaaq karna lazim nahiN.

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Armaan saHib

aap ki ghazal pasand aayee, ache mazaameen nikaale haiN.

matle per Jawaid bhai ki tajveez pasand aayee.

ghazal per daad Haazir hai qubool farmaaiN

amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Jawed Bhai aur Amjad Bhai,

Shukriyaa!! Aap logon ki aara se main bilkul muttafeeq hoon aur aap ko ye jaan ka hairat hogi ke main bhi wahi kaha tha par ek ustaad-e-fan ne usko islah kiya to unhon ne.......... aisa kiya aur main unka ehtaraam karta hoon. warna main kya aur meri shaayeri kya.......... mujhe to shaayeri ki abjad bhi nahin maaloom.

Duaon main yaad rakhein.

aap ka

armaan
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