Dear Friends in Urdubandhan,
Ek Ghazal aap sab ke liye... ummed hai pasand aayegi.
armaan
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Re: Ek Ghazal Aur Sahi....
Azeezi Arman SaHab!munir-armaan-nasimi wrote:Dear Friends in Urdubandhan,
Ek Ghazal aap sab ke liye... ummed hai pasand aayegi.
armaan
Aadaab
Aapki Gazal pasaNd aaii KhuSoosan aaKhree sher ne bohat mutAssir kiya. Daad qubool kijiye.
Sirf itna arz karne ki ijazat chahooNga keh matley meN misra.e Caane kuch cafaai chaahta hai. Is misrey meN alfaz ki tarteeb kuch munasib nahiN hai. Kuch aur kar ke dekhiye; masla" ghar meN bachche agar nahiN hotey...aise ghar m'otabar nahiN hotey.
Mera mashwarah Galat bhi ho sakta hai aap ka is se ittefaaq karna lazim nahiN.
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Jawed Bhai aur Amjad Bhai,
Shukriyaa!! Aap logon ki aara se main bilkul muttafeeq hoon aur aap ko ye jaan ka hairat hogi ke main bhi wahi kaha tha par ek ustaad-e-fan ne usko islah kiya to unhon ne.......... aisa kiya aur main unka ehtaraam karta hoon. warna main kya aur meri shaayeri kya.......... mujhe to shaayeri ki abjad bhi nahin maaloom.
Duaon main yaad rakhein.
aap ka
armaan
Shukriyaa!! Aap logon ki aara se main bilkul muttafeeq hoon aur aap ko ye jaan ka hairat hogi ke main bhi wahi kaha tha par ek ustaad-e-fan ne usko islah kiya to unhon ne.......... aisa kiya aur main unka ehtaraam karta hoon. warna main kya aur meri shaayeri kya.......... mujhe to shaayeri ki abjad bhi nahin maaloom.
Duaon main yaad rakhein.
aap ka
armaan