Muntakhab shayari-Baitbaazi-Lafz par Ashaar
Daanish
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by Daanish » Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:13 am
azeezaan-e-bazm
aaiye, riwayati bait baazi ke silsila ka aaGaaz phir se karte haiN, jis meiN shayr ke aaKhri Harf se agla shayr pesh kiya jayega. umeed hai ke aap sab is silsile meiN shirkat farmayenge. lijiye pehlaa shayr Haazir hai:
dahr meiN naqsh-e-wafaa vajh-e-tasalli na hua
hai yeh woh lafz ke sharmindah-e-ma'ani na hua
'alif' se shayr pesh kijiye aur silisile ko aage baRHaaiye
rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Tue Aug 29, 2006 4:35 am
abr-e-gham dil se uThaa aankh se daryaa barsaa
Doob jaane ko thee dunyaa miri itnaa barsaa
(alif)
Shayer: Abdullah Nazir.
Nazir.
Daanish
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by Daanish » Tue Aug 29, 2006 4:39 am
'alif'
ik alif beesh nahiN saiqal-e-aaina hanoz
chaak karta huN maiN jab se ke garebaaN samjhaa
--Ghalib
'alif'
Daanish
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by Daanish » Tue Aug 29, 2006 4:42 am
'ye'
yuN hi gar rotaa raha Ghalib, tau ai ahl-e-jahaaN
dekhnaa in bastiyoN tum ke viiraaN ho gayiiN
'nuun'
rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Tue Aug 29, 2006 4:54 am
nah pooch Haal hamaara ghubaar-e-SeHraa meiN
MakaaN se Haalat-e-deewar o dar nahiN chupti.
(ye)
Shayer: Abdullah Nazir.
Nazir.
Daanish
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by Daanish » Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:09 pm
alif
aadmi aisa kahaaN koi farishta ho tau ho
shaiKh saHeb nahiN ma'aloom ke tum kis pe gaye
DaaGh
'ye'
rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Tue Aug 29, 2006 4:23 pm
aasmaaN se maangle bheegi ghaTaa kee ouRhni
sar nahiN meraa munaasib tere shaane ke liye.
Shayer: Abdullah Nazir.
Nazir.
ummassad
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by ummassad » Wed Aug 30, 2006 3:15 am
yeh alag baat kh sherminda.e.tabeer nh houn
warna her zahen main kuch tajmahel hoty hain
noon se
Daanish
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by Daanish » Wed Aug 30, 2006 5:17 am
'nuun'
na gul apnaa, na Khaar apnaa, na zaalim baaGhbaaN apnaa
banaaya aah kis gulshan meiN hum ne aashiyaaN apnaa
'alif'
rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
zmufti
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by zmufti » Wed Aug 30, 2006 4:20 pm
utarii.n ajiib roshaniyaa.N raat Khvaab me.n
kyaa kyaa na aks tair rahe the saraab me.n
ummassad
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by ummassad » Wed Aug 30, 2006 4:51 pm
manzil.e.ishq ph tanha pounchey koi tammana saath nh thi
thak thak ke is raah me.n aakhir ak ak saathi choot gaiya
alif se
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Tue Sep 05, 2006 12:43 am
imtiHaaN aur sahi ham nah karenge uff tak
naaz-bardaar heiN ai umr-e-gurezaaN tere
(ye)
Shayer: Abdullah Nazir.
Nazir.
PK Swami
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by PK Swami » Tue Sep 05, 2006 4:40 pm
yaqeen rakh k yahaaN har yaqeen meiN hai fareb
baqaa to kyaa hai,fanaa kaa bhee aitbaar na kar ! -Aasee
PK Swami
mujhe dil diyaa to taRap bhee de
jo hooN doosroN kaa sharik.e gham
mujhe aisey dil kee talab naheeN
jo kisii ke kaam na aa sake
zmufti
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by zmufti » Tue Sep 05, 2006 6:59 pm
raato.n me.n gar na ashk bahaa_uu.N to kyaa karuu.N
ik pal bhii us ko bhuul na paa_uu.N to kyaa karuu.N
Daanish
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by Daanish » Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:38 pm
lijiye 'nuun' se
nazar aati nahiN ab dil meiN tamanna koi
ba'ad muddat ke tamanna miri bar aayi hai
--Haali
'ye'
rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib