riwayati 'bait-baazi'

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azeezaan-e-bazm

aaiye, riwayati bait baazi ke silsila ka aaGaaz phir se karte haiN, jis meiN shayr ke aaKhri Harf se agla shayr pesh kiya jayega. umeed hai ke aap sab is silsile meiN shirkat farmayenge. lijiye pehlaa shayr Haazir hai:

dahr meiN naqsh-e-wafaa vajh-e-tasalli na hua
hai yeh woh lafz ke sharmindah-e-ma'ani na hua

'alif' se shayr pesh kijiye aur silisile ko aage baRHaaiye
rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
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abr-e-gham dil se uThaa aankh se daryaa barsaa

Doob jaane ko thee dunyaa miri itnaa barsaa

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'alif'

ik alif beesh nahiN saiqal-e-aaina hanoz
chaak karta huN maiN jab se ke garebaaN samjhaa
--Ghalib

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'ye'

yuN hi gar rotaa raha Ghalib, tau ai ahl-e-jahaaN
dekhnaa in bastiyoN tum ke viiraaN ho gayiiN

'nuun'
rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
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nah pooch Haal hamaara ghubaar-e-SeHraa meiN

MakaaN se Haalat-e-deewar o dar nahiN chupti.

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alif

aadmi aisa kahaaN koi farishta ho tau ho
shaiKh saHeb nahiN ma'aloom ke tum kis pe gaye
DaaGh

'ye'
rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
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aasmaaN se maangle bheegi ghaTaa kee ouRhni

sar nahiN meraa munaasib tere shaane ke liye.



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yeh alag baat kh sherminda.e.tabeer nh houn
warna her zahen main kuch tajmahel hoty hain

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'nuun'

na gul apnaa, na Khaar apnaa, na zaalim baaGhbaaN apnaa
banaaya aah kis gulshan meiN hum ne aashiyaaN apnaa

'alif'

rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
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utarii.n ajiib roshaniyaa.N raat Khvaab me.n
kyaa kyaa na aks tair rahe the saraab me.n
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manzil.e.ishq ph tanha pounchey koi tammana saath nh thi
thak thak ke is raah me.n aakhir ak ak saathi choot gaiya

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imtiHaaN aur sahi ham nah karenge uff tak

naaz-bardaar heiN ai umr-e-gurezaaN tere


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yaqeen rakh k yahaaN har yaqeen meiN hai fareb
baqaa to kyaa hai,fanaa kaa bhee aitbaar na kar ! -Aasee



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ik pal bhii us ko bhuul na paa_uu.N to kyaa karuu.N
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lijiye 'nuun' se

nazar aati nahiN ab dil meiN tamanna koi
ba'ad muddat ke tamanna miri bar aayi hai
--Haali

'ye'
rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
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