Jawaid SaHeb
Muzaffar SaHeb
Saraa SaHiba
Sohail SaHeb
Yasir SaHeb
meiN aap tamaam logoaN ka shukrguzaar hooN k mujhe sikhaane k leeaye aap itni meHnat kar rahay haiN. aap se multimis hooN ke nikaat par marii mazeed taSHeeH farmaa daiN. meiN apne apne aap ko defend kar ke aap ka qeemti waqt naheeN barbaad karnaa chahtaa laikin ye zaroor samajhna chaahtaa hooN ke kia ghalat hai aor kyooN?
1. jo zulfoN ko un ki ghataa baandhtay haiN
woh sooraj ko goyaa diyaa baandhtay haiN
aor molvi Muhammad Naeem ul Haq ka ye sher' daikhiaye jo pehlay to iss matlaa ka phir poori ghazal ka moharrak huwaa
jo tum apne rukhsaar ko chaand maano
to ham gaisooaN ka ghataa baandhteN haiN.
unhooN ne gaisoa-oan ko ghataa bandhaa hai. yani gaisoo ko ghataa kahaa hai. to mairaa ye khyaal hai ke agar zulf yaar ko koi ghataa kahay to aise hi hai jaise sooraj ko diyaa kahaa ja rahaa ho.
2. hawaa jo shararat karay un se koi
woh aanchal meiN apni hawaa bandhtay haiN
iss sher meiN baandhana apne lafzi m'anoaN meiN ist'emaal huwaa hai. jaise ke :aazaad: ne is sher meiN kiyaa hai.
qiamat bapaa ho gi uthhay ga fitnaa
woh juRaa naheeN ik balaa bandhtay haiN
iss sh'er meiN jooRaa bandnaa meiN baandhana lafzi m'ainoN meN ist'emaal huwaa hai.
ub rahi baat hawaa ke baandhne ki to hawaa to baandha hi naheeN ja saktaa haaN koshish ki jaa sati hai ke jub woh apnaa uRtaa huwaa aanchal theek kartay haiN to aisaa lagtaa hai ke aaNchal meiN hawaa baandhne ki koshish kar rahay haoN.
3. zaraa sochiaye kiss ki ruswai ho gi
agar dar se ham boriyaa baandhtay haiN
boriyaa baandhaa , boriyaa bistar baandhana se hi hai.
4. hay kia 'aashiqi 'ishaq hai kiyaa m'uamma,
ye mazmoon woh kuch judaa bandhtay haiN
shayed urdu bandhan par hi paRhaa tha kaheeN. "khoob kyaal baandha hai" issi se meiN ne "mazmoon baandh" diyaa
leejiaye abhi mazmoon baaNdhanaa ki sanad bhi mil gayee hai. meer anees likhte haiN.
ik phool ka mazmoon ho so rang meiN baandhooN
aor ghalib likhte haiN,
Na bandhe tashnagiye shauq ke mazmon Ghalib!
Garche dil khol ke dariya ko bhi sahil bandha
yaani "mazmoon bandhne" ki tarkeeb meiN radeef ke ist'emaal meiN koi gar bar naheeN haaN agar mafhoom Saaf naheen to issay iss taraH kar laite haiN
hay kia 'aashiqi, Husn hai kyaaa mu'ammaa
ye mazmoon ham kuch judaa baandhtay haiN.
kia kuch baat bani?
5. hameiN dijiaye 'ehdo o peemaan saaray
abhi un pe taar e wafaa bandhtay haiN.
is sh'er meiN baandhana lafzi ma'noN meN ist'emaal kiyaa hai. pehlay miSra meiN eHd o paimaan kijiaye ki bajaaye dijiaye hai. aor ye daina "give" ke ma'enoN meiN hai. muHawara meiN kiaye ki replacement naheeN. ke tum ne jo bhi eHd o paiman (doosroaN se) ki-aye huway haiN meiN un ko poora karne meiN tumharay saath hooN.
6. baRa khoobSoorat takhuyyul hai :khawar:
woh zakhm e jigar par ridaa bandhtay haiN
yahaaN bhi baandhna lafzi ma'inoaN meN ist'emaal huwaa hai. off course zakhm par chaadar naheeN baandhi jaatil laikin chaadar phaaR ka uss ka kuch Hissa hi baandhaa jaataa hai. laikin baaz auqaat ham juzv ke leeaye kul istemaal kartay haiN. jaise kaanoaN meiN ungliaN Daalna, bhalaa ungliaN kab daali jaati haiN? Sirf poraiN Daali jaati haiN.
mazeed rehnumai ka taalib
talib e ilm
MUHAMMAD K. SIDDIQUI
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