Ghazal - Jhatak diya......!!

[munir-armaan-nasimi]

Urdubandhan ke Sukhanwar Dosto,

Salam-o-Rehmat...!! Ek Adna si koshish... aap kii khidmat main pesh karne ki saadat hasil kar raha hoon.

Umeed ke apni giraan-qadr aara se nawaz kar shukriya ada karne ka mauqa inayat farmayenge.

Aap ka apna,

Munir Armaan Nasimi

[Sohail Malik]

munir saaheb
assalam o alaekum

aap ki ghazal mazmun kay etebaar say to bohat achi hay albata tekneeki lihaaz say kuch jaghoN per wazan ka masala lag raha hay.

wassalam

sohail malik

[munir-armaan-nasimi]

Beradaram Sohail Saheb,

armaan-nawazi ka tah-e-dil se shukr guzaar hoon. Magar Bhai jaan.... kahaan kahaan wazan se kam ho gaya hoon agar aap islah nahiin karenge to main seekhoonga kaise...??? Plz. mujhe wapasi daak se islah se nawazein, mamnoon rahoonga.

Aap ka bhai,

Munir Armaan