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Dosto!
Aadaab

Urdu Duniya ke mahana tarahee mushaireh ke liye maiN ne bohat
sada see ghazal kahee hai jo aap ki nazr bhee kar raha hooN.
Ummid hai apni aara se nawazeNge.

Aapka MuKhliS
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bunke raihbar jo rahzanee ki hai
tum ne tauheen.e raihbaree ki hai


shairee per nah kyuun ho naaz mujhe
“Meer.o.Ghalib” ki pairawee ki hai


woh jo kahta tha buzdili hai Haram
aaj usne hi Khud kushee ki hai


dil meN jo Gham chhupa ke rakhkha hai
yeh amaanat bhi aap hi ki hai


jaadaa-e ishq ke haiN raihro hum
“har qadam hum ne aashiqui ki hai”


sher duniya ko Khud bataa deNge
yeh Ghazal kaun see Sadee ki hai


turk-e ulfat ka phir bhi Gham hai unheN
waise yeh baat tou Khushee ki hai


qadr GairoN ki baRh gaii “Jawaid”
jab bhi apnoN ne dushmanee ki hai
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moHtaram Biradaram Janab Jawaid Badauni SaaHib aadaab!

aap kee Ghazal mulaHiZ^ah kee kiyaa kehne maashAllah sabhee she'er khubSuratee haiN. aor khaaS t^aor par
yeh she'r to Jaan-e-Ghazal hai.

shairee per nah kyuun ho naaz mujhe
“Meer.o.Ghalib” ki pairawee ki hai

puree Ghazal mat^la' se maqt^a' tak aap kee she'ree khuda'temadee aor apne qalam par aa'temaad-o-yaqeen kee e'lamat bhee ban gaee hai. kalam meN Ghazal ke sabhee taqaZ^ooN ko zehen nasheeN rakhaa geya hai. yahee wajah hei keh asha'aar meN qudratee rang-e-iz^haar jhalak aayaa hai.

bunke raihbar jo rahzanee ki hai
tum ne tauheen.e raihbaree ki hai
Kiyaa kehne! Waah! Waah!

shairee per nah kyuun ho naaz mujhe
“Meer.o.Ghalib” ki pairawee ki hai
Bohot Khoob! Waah, Waah,

woh jo kahta tha buzdili hai Haram
aaj usne hi Khud kushee ki hai
Waah, Waah,

dil meN jo Gham chhupa ke rakhkha hai
yeh amaanat bhi aap hi ki hai
Kiyaa kehne Waah, Waah

jaadaa-e ishq ke haiN raihro hum
“har qadam hum ne aashiqui ki hai”
Waah, Waah, Waah

sher duniya ko Khud bataa deNge
yeh Ghazal kaun see Sadee ki hai
Kiyaa kehne!

turk-e ulfat ka phir bhi Gham hai unheN
waise yeh baat tou Khushee ki hai
Waah!

qadr GairoN ki baRh gaii “Jawaid”
jab bhi apnoN ne dushmanee ki hai
Bohot Khoob! Waah, Waah

meree janib se is khubSurat aor dilaawaeZ Ghazal par dilee mubarak baad qubool keejiye!

Wassalam
Mzaffar A Muzaffar

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Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:
moHtaram Biradaram Janab Jawaid Badauni SaaHib aadaab!

aap kee Ghazal mulaHiZ^ah kee kiyaa kehne maashAllah sabhee she'er khubSuratee haiN. aor khaaS t^aor par
yeh she'r to Jaan-e-Ghazal hai.

shairee per nah kyuun ho naaz mujhe
“Meer.o.Ghalib” ki pairawee ki hai

puree Ghazal mat^la' se maqt^a' tak aap kee she'ree khuda'temadee aor apne qalam par aa'temaad-o-yaqeen kee e'lamat bhee ban gaee hai. kalam meN Ghazal ke sabhee taqaZ^ooN ko zehen nasheeN rakhaa geya hai. yahee wajah hei keh asha'aar meN qudratee rang-e-iz^haar jhalak aayaa hai.

bunke raihbar jo rahzanee ki hai
tum ne tauheen.e raihbaree ki hai
Kiyaa kehne! Waah! Waah!

shairee per nah kyuun ho naaz mujhe
“Meer.o.Ghalib” ki pairawee ki hai
Bohot Khoob! Waah, Waah,

woh jo kahta tha buzdili hai Haram
aaj usne hi Khud kushee ki hai
Waah, Waah,

dil meN jo Gham chhupa ke rakhkha hai
yeh amaanat bhi aap hi ki hai
Kiyaa kehne Waah, Waah

jaadaa-e ishq ke haiN raihro hum
“har qadam hum ne aashiqui ki hai”
Waah, Waah, Waah

sher duniya ko Khud bataa deNge
yeh Ghazal kaun see Sadee ki hai
Kiyaa kehne!

turk-e ulfat ka phir bhi Gham hai unheN
waise yeh baat tou Khushee ki hai
Waah!

qadr GairoN ki baRh gaii “Jawaid”
jab bhi apnoN ne dushmanee ki hai
Bohot Khoob! Waah, Waah

meree janib se is khubSurat aor dilaawaeZ Ghazal par dilee mubarak baad qubool keejiye!

Wassalam
Mzaffar A Muzaffar




Biraadaram Muzaffar SaaHab
aadaab

Aap aajkal miSrey hi itne achche de rahe haiN Ghazal kahan aur bhi aasaan ho gaya hai. Bohat Khuloos se daad dete haiN aap bohat himmat afzaaii hoti hai. Kis zubaan se aap ka shukriya adaa kiya jaaye ?

MUjhe ummid hai achchee GahzaleN aayeNgee aur mushairah kaamyaab rahega.

Ek baar phir shukriya.

MuKhliS
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woh jo kahta tha buzdili hai Haram
aaj usne hi Khud kushee ki hai

ahaa haa. bohat khoob janab. bohat hi khoob.

dar Haqeeqat jaise jaise is sh'er par sochtaa hooN nayee se mazmoon ka diaraa kaar wasee' hi hotaa nazar aaraa hai. idhar sochtaa hooN ke is meN bashri taqazoN ke teHt honay wali ghalati ka eHaata kiyaa gyaa hai to saath hi un qol o fa'el meN tazaad par tanz nazar aa jaataa hai. aor aglay hi lamHay insaaN ki majboorioN ki taSveer ban jaati hai ke Haalaat usay us moR par lay aateN haiN ke ussa woh sab kuch kanraa paRhtaa jisay woh buraa jaantaa hai. yaqeenun mairi quwaat e goyaaee aisi naheeN ke is sher ki daad ka SaHeeH Haq adaa kar sakooN so sirf bohat khoob par hi iktifaa kartaa hooN.

is ghazal ke darj zail ashaar bhi bohat pasand aa-aye,

sher duniya ko Khud bataa deNge
yeh Ghazal kaun see Sadee ki hai


qadr GairoN ki baRh gaii “Jawaid”
jab bhi apnoN ne dushmanee ki hai


aik aor shaandaar ghazal kehne par mubaarakbaad qubool kijiaye.

mukhliS,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.
+92 321 4435273

938-C-Faisal Town, Lahore.
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muhammad_19k@hotmail.com
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jawaid badauni wrote:

Dosto!
Aadaab

Urdu Duniya ke mahana tarahee mushaireh ke liye maiN ne bohat
sada see ghazal kahee hai jo aap ki nazr bhee kar raha hooN.
Ummid hai apni aara se nawazeNge.

Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid


bunke raihbar jo rahzanee ki hai
tum ne tauheen.e raihbaree ki hai
WAH JAWAID BHAI..... KYA TANZ KIYA HAI AAP NE..... AAJ KAL TO YAHI SAB KUCH HO RAHA HAI..... HIND-O-PAAK KE RAIHBARON KI ZAAT BATA DI AAP NE.
shairee per nah kyuun ho naaz mujhe
“Meer.o.Ghalib” ki pairawee ki hai
KYON NAHIN... HUM SAB SHAIR LOG... MEER-O-GHALIB KE HI RISHTEDAAR HAIN.... HAI NA?! ACHCHA SHER HAI.
woh jo kahta tha buzdili hai Haram
aaj usne hi Khud kushee ki hai
BHAI WAH... KYA KEHNE... MAGAR JAWAID BHAI.... KHUD-KUSHEE KARNE KE LIYE BHI 'HIMMAT' CHAHIYE... DARPOK TO WOHH BHI NAHIN KAR SAKTA........
dil meN jo Gham chhupa ke rakhkha hai
yeh amaanat bhi aap hi ki hai
Hai Hai... Kya baat hai..... yeh amaanat bhi aap hi ki hai........ kya khoob kaha hai.. Daad qobool kijiye.
jaadaa-e ishq ke haiN raihro hum
“har qadam hum ne aashiqui ki hai”
BAHUT KHUBSOORAT SHER HAI.. ACHCHI GIRAH LAGAYI HAI AAP NE.
sher duniya ko Khud bataa deNge
yeh Ghazal kaun see Sadee ki hai
YE SHER MUJHE SAB SE ZIYADA PASAND AAYA.. HAASIL-E-GHAZAL SHER HAI.. KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI BHAI.
turk-e ulfat ka phir bhi Gham hai unheN
waise yeh baat tou Khushee ki hai


qadr GairoN ki baRh gaii “Jawaid”
jab bhi apnoN ne dushmanee ki hai
KYA MAQTA' KAHA HAI AAP NE..... QADR GAIRON KI BARH GAYI...... WAH WAH..... BAHUT KHOOB... DAAD KE PHOOL PESH-E KHIDMAT HAIN.... QOBOOL KAREIN.

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munir-armaan-nasimi wrote:
jawaid badauni wrote:

Dosto!
Aadaab

Urdu Duniya ke mahana tarahee mushaireh ke liye maiN ne bohat
sada see ghazal kahee hai jo aap ki nazr bhee kar raha hooN.
Ummid hai apni aara se nawazeNge.

Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid



bunke raihbar jo rahzanee ki hai
tum ne tauheen.e raihbaree ki hai
WAH JAWAID BHAI..... KYA TANZ KIYA HAI AAP NE..... AAJ KAL TO YAHI SAB KUCH HO RAHA HAI..... HIND-O-PAAK KE RAIHBARON KI ZAAT BATA DI AAP NE.
shairee per nah kyuun ho naaz mujhe
“Meer.o.Ghalib” ki pairawee ki hai
KYON NAHIN... HUM SAB SHAIR LOG... MEER-O-GHALIB KE HI RISHTEDAAR HAIN.... HAI NA?! ACHCHA SHER HAI.
woh jo kahta tha buzdili hai Haram
aaj usne hi Khud kushee ki hai
BHAI WAH... KYA KEHNE... MAGAR JAWAID BHAI.... KHUD-KUSHEE KARNE KE LIYE BHI 'HIMMAT' CHAHIYE... DARPOK TO WOHH BHI NAHIN KAR SAKTA........
dil meN jo Gham chhupa ke rakhkha hai
yeh amaanat bhi aap hi ki hai
Hai Hai... Kya baat hai..... yeh amaanat bhi aap hi ki hai........ kya khoob kaha hai.. Daad qobool kijiye.
jaadaa-e ishq ke haiN raihro hum
“har qadam hum ne aashiqui ki hai”
BAHUT KHUBSOORAT SHER HAI.. ACHCHI GIRAH LAGAYI HAI AAP NE.
sher duniya ko Khud bataa deNge
yeh Ghazal kaun see Sadee ki hai
YE SHER MUJHE SAB SE ZIYADA PASAND AAYA.. HAASIL-E-GHAZAL SHER HAI.. KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI BHAI.
turk-e ulfat ka phir bhi Gham hai unheN
waise yeh baat tou Khushee ki hai


qadr GairoN ki baRh gaii “Jawaid”
jab bhi apnoN ne dushmanee ki hai
KYA MAQTA' KAHA HAI AAP NE..... QADR GAIRON KI BARH GAYI...... WAH WAH..... BAHUT KHOOB... DAAD KE PHOOL PESH-E KHIDMAT HAIN.... QOBOOL KAREIN.


Azeezi Munir Armaan SaaHab
aadaab

Aap ne behud purKhuloos andaaz se daad dee hai aur nihayat umdah tabsare se nawazah hai jiske liye aap ka behud mamnoon hooN.

Bhaai aap ne kuch iss tarah "type" kiya tha keh aap ke tabsarey mere sheroN meN shamil ho gaye thEy. MaiN ne unheN bhi alag alag kar diya hai. Yeh bohat asaan kaam hai. Pahle puree post lo "quote" kar deN phir jis sher per tabasara karna hai usko phir "quote" karden aur type karte chale jaaiye. "Quote" ki "sign" doosree line meN doosre number per hai jahaN "bold" wa deegar "signs" dee gaii haiN. Ummid hai yeh Tareeqah aap ki samajh meN aa gaya hoga. Ek baar koshish karke dekhiyega.

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muhammad_19k wrote:woh jo kahta tha buzdili hai Haram
aaj usne hi Khud kushee ki hai

ahaa haa. bohat khoob janab. bohat hi khoob.

dar Haqeeqat jaise jaise is sh'er par sochtaa hooN nayee se mazmoon ka diaraa kaar wasee' hi hotaa nazar aaraa hai. idhar sochtaa hooN ke is meN bashri taqazoN ke teHt honay wali ghalati ka eHaata kiyaa gyaa hai to saath hi un qol o fa'el meN tazaad par tanz nazar aa jaataa hai. aor aglay hi lamHay insaaN ki majboorioN ki taSveer ban jaati hai ke Haalaat usay us moR par lay aateN haiN ke ussa woh sab kuch kanraa paRhtaa jisay woh buraa jaantaa hai. yaqeenun mairi quwaat e goyaaee aisi naheeN ke is sher ki daad ka SaHeeH Haq adaa kar sakooN so sirf bohat khoob par hi iktifaa kartaa hooN.

is ghazal ke darj zail ashaar bhi bohat pasand aa-aye,

sher duniya ko Khud bataa deNge
yeh Ghazal kaun see Sadee ki hai


qadr GairoN ki baRh gaii “Jawaid”
jab bhi apnoN ne dushmanee ki hai


aik aor shaandaar ghazal kehne par mubaarakbaad qubool kijiaye.

mukhliS,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui

Azeezi wa moHibbee Khawar MiyaaN

Aapki purkhuloos daad ke liye aap ka mamnoon hooN.

Ek sher per aap ne KhuSooSan bohat ziyadah daad de hai. Yeh apni apni pasaNd ki baat hoti hai. Kisi ko koii sher pasaNd aata hai tou kisee ko wohee sher itna ziyadah achcha nahiN lagta. Aap ne deegar ashAAr ki bhi tAAreef ki hai. Ghazal ki pazeeraaii ke liye ek baar phir aap ka shukriya.

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jawaid badauni wrote:Dosto!
Aadaab

:salaam2:
jawaid bhai saahib

Urdu Duniya ke mahana tarahee mushaireh ke liye maiN ne bohat
sada see ghazal kahee hai jo aap ki nazr bhee kar raha hooN.


'ata keejiye

Ummid hai apni aara se nawazeNge.

insha allah.

Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid




bunke raihbar jo rahzanee ki hai
tum ne tauheen.e raihbaree ki hai

bahut accha sher hai.masha allah


shairee per nah kyuun ho naaz mujhe
“Meer.o.Ghalib” ki pairawee ki hai

kya kehnay....waah waah.


woh jo kahta tha buzdili hai Haram
aaj usne hi Khud kushee ki hai

bahut khoob

dil meN jo Gham chhupa ke rakhkha hai
yeh amaanat bhi aap hi ki hai

kyaa baat hai


jaadaa-e ishq ke haiN raihro hum
“har qadam hum ne aashiqui ki hai”

bahut acche girah hai........


sher duniya ko Khud bataa deNge
yeh Ghazal kaun see Sadee ki hai

bilkul sahi .......


turk-e ulfat ka phir bhi Gham hai unheN
waise yeh baat tou Khushee ki hai

waah.....


qadr GairoN ki baRh gaii “Jawaid”
jab bhi apnoN ne dushmanee ki hai

aik talkh haqeeqat.bahut khoob

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haamidbaaqri wrote:
jawaid badauni wrote:Dosto!
Aadaab

:salaam2:
jawaid bhai saahib

Urdu Duniya ke mahana tarahee mushaireh ke liye maiN ne bohat
sada see ghazal kahee hai jo aap ki nazr bhee kar raha hooN.


'ata keejiye

Ummid hai apni aara se nawazeNge.

insha allah.

Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid




bunke raihbar jo rahzanee ki hai
tum ne tauheen.e raihbaree ki hai

bahut accha sher hai.masha allah


shairee per nah kyuun ho naaz mujhe
“Meer.o.Ghalib” ki pairawee ki hai

kya kehnay....waah waah.


woh jo kahta tha buzdili hai Haram
aaj usne hi Khud kushee ki hai

bahut khoob

dil meN jo Gham chhupa ke rakhkha hai
yeh amaanat bhi aap hi ki hai

kyaa baat hai


jaadaa-e ishq ke haiN raihro hum
“har qadam hum ne aashiqui ki hai”

bahut acche girah hai........


sher duniya ko Khud bataa deNge
yeh Ghazal kaun see Sadee ki hai

bilkul sahi .......


turk-e ulfat ka phir bhi Gham hai unheN
waise yeh baat tou Khushee ki hai

waah.....


qadr GairoN ki baRh gaii “Jawaid”
jab bhi apnoN ne dushmanee ki hai

aik talkh haqeeqat.bahut khoob

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is muracca ghazal per hamaari dilee daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayeN

allah(sbhnwt)karay zoray qalam aur ziyaadah

aapka apna
haamidbaaqari


Azeezi Haamid Baaqri SaaHab,
Salame Masnoon

Der aayad durust aayad.

Aapki purkhulooS daad wa giraaNqadr tabsaroN ke liye aap ka
behud mamnoon hooN.

Khoosh raheN!

Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid Badauni

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