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Wed Aug 29, 2007 6:01 pm

moHtaram Faypal saaHib aadaab!

kaese mizaaj haiN ammeed keh kheriyat se hooN ge.
Aap kee Ghazal dekhee jo keh jadeed aor munfarid ma'loom hoee. na'ee sooch aor fikr daaman-e-sukhan ko waseea' karne kaa maojab bantee haiN. aap ka munfarid andaaz-e-Ghazal dilkash hai. aor qaadil-e-daad bhee.

meree janib se is kamyaab koshish par dilee daad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar

ummassad · Post by **ummassad** » Thu Aug 30, 2007 2:04 am

bahout khoub faypal sahib kiya kahney.

Post by **faypal** » Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:48 pm

Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:moHtaram Faypal saaHib aadaab!

kaese mizaaj haiN ammeed keh kheriyat se hooN ge.
Aap kee Ghazal dekhee jo keh jadeed aor munfarid ma'loom hoee. na'ee sooch aor fikr daaman-e-sukhan ko waseea' karne kaa maojab bantee haiN. aap ka munfarid andaaz-e-Ghazal dilkash hai. aor qaadil-e-daad bhee.

meree janib se is kamyaab koshish par dilee daad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar

Thanks.........May God bless you with His special pleasures and treasures.

Post by **faypal** » Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:49 pm

ummassad wrote:bahout khoub faypal sahib kiya kahney.

Thanks..........God bless you.

Post by **faypal** » Sun Sep 02, 2007 3:27 am

sara_j wrote:adaab arz hai.

sabse pehle urdubandhan per khushamdeed!!

aapki inayatkarda ghazlei.n mehfil-e-urdubandhan

ki rounaq mei.n khoobsurat izafa hain.

ghazal ka mat'la, shiar # 2 aur 3 bohat khoob hai.n !!

"bheja hai kisne jaam ye khat mei.n lapait ker?
bheege hue hain lafz bhi saare sharaab mei.n"

waah! bohat khoob!

chan chan ke aa rahi hai jo aangan mein chandni
lipta houa hai chaand ka chehraa naqaab mei.n!!

awesome!!........shair ko paRhte hue kuch haseen manzar
aankhon mein dekh rahi thi waah!!

mai.n jisko dhoondta raha baagho.n mein aaj tak
voh phool kaun rakh gaya meri kitaab mei.n?

kya kehne janaab!! bohat khoob!

taaro.n se likh ke main ne bhi bheja tha khat use
bheji hai jisne chandni khat ke jawaab mein.

kya kehne kya kehne!!

baithi hai kitni dair se aanchal pe titliyaa.n
ye kaun rkah gaya hai mera dil gulaab mein

:Afzal: main kya batau.n tira haath dekh ker?
ek din bhi vasl ka nahi tere hisaab mein!!

waah! janaab dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye!

umeed ke aap ainda bhi urdubandhan ke liye apne taaza
kalaam nawaazte rahe.nge

mukhlis

sara

Thanks for this inspiration........your each word is sweeter than my whole lyric........may God eternalize your pleasures.