Yaraan.e mehfil, aadaab
kisee bhee shayar ya muSannif ki taKhliqaat per Haalat.e zamanah ka aSar paRta hai. iss baar meri Ghazal maujoodah Halaat se kuch ziyadah hi mutaAssir ho gaii hai, jiske liye maAzrat Khuwaah hooN. aaj maiN ne apne dil ki bat kahee hai so Ghazal jaise bhi hai bardasht kar lijiye.
Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid Badauni
hameN alaam ki bohtat pe rona aaya
"roone waale tujhe kis baat peh roonaa aaya"
paRhke aKhbaar harik baat pe rona aya
qaum aur mulk ke Halaat pe rona aaya
Hadiya.e runj o alam haNs ke kiya hum ne qubool
HaN magar KhushiyoN ki sauGaat per rona aaya
aisa lagta hai zameer unka abhi zindah hai
jinko tareeKh ke SufHaat pe rona aaya
apne Halaat pe ik ashk bahaya nah kabhi
baarha auroN ke Halaat pe rona aaya
jinheN shak hota hai hubbul waTanee per meri
mujhe aisoN ke Khyaalaat pe rona aaya
tum tou haNste hi rahaa karte thEy :Jawaid: miyaN
aaj kya baat hi kis baat pe rona aaya
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meri TaraHee Ghazal..........mushairah "January"
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moHtaram Biradaram Jawaid Badauni SaaHib tasleemaat!
Ummeed hai kheriyat se hooN ge. mushae'rah meN aap kee shirkat baae'ic-e-iftekhaar hai. tashreef aawaree ke liye aap kaa teh-e-dil se mamnoon hooN. khush raheeN.
Guzarish#36 ke liye aap ke asha'aar dekhne kee taofeeq milee. sabhee asha'aar aap ke jazbah-e-Hubbul wat^anaee kaa barmalaa iz^haar kar rahe haiN aap ne baRee chabak dastee se Haalaat-e-haaZ^irah kee taSweer kashee kee hai. mulkee siyaasee Haalaat jo keh andohnaak aor qaabil-e-muzammat haiN. Haalaat kee is kashmakash meN shaae'ir kaa Hassaas dil mutaacir huwe baGhaer naheeN reh saktaa. yahee wajah hai keh aap kaa GudaaZ dil-o-dimaaGh Haalaat kee is kasheedagee ke tanazur meN naoHah kunaaN hai. aor kiyooN nah ho keh aap aek Hassaas shaa'ir haiN.
hameN alaam ki bohtat pe rona aaya
"roone waale tujhe kis baat peh roonaa aaya"
Waah! bajaa farmayaa hai.
paRhke aKhbaar harik baat pe rona aya
qaum aur mulk ke Halaat pe rona aaya
beshak!
Hadiya.e runj o alam haNs ke kiya hum ne qubool
HaN magar KhushiyoN ki sauGaat per rona aaya
jee jawaid bhaee yahee Haqeeqat hai.
aisa lagta hai zameer unka abhi zindah hai
jinko tareeKh ke SufHaat pe rona aaya
Waah Waah!
apne Halaat pe ik ashk bahaya nah kabhi
baarha auroN ke Halaat pe rona aaya
Bohot khoob Kiya kehne!
jinheN shak hota hai hubbul waTanee per meri
mujhe aisoN ke Khyaalaat pe rona aaya
Waah Waah!
tum tou haNste hi rahaa karte thEy :Jawaid: miyaN
aaj kya baat hi kis baat pe rona aaya
Bohot khoob Waah!
Jawaid bhaee meree jaanib se is Ghazal par dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
Ummeed hai kheriyat se hooN ge. mushae'rah meN aap kee shirkat baae'ic-e-iftekhaar hai. tashreef aawaree ke liye aap kaa teh-e-dil se mamnoon hooN. khush raheeN.
Guzarish#36 ke liye aap ke asha'aar dekhne kee taofeeq milee. sabhee asha'aar aap ke jazbah-e-Hubbul wat^anaee kaa barmalaa iz^haar kar rahe haiN aap ne baRee chabak dastee se Haalaat-e-haaZ^irah kee taSweer kashee kee hai. mulkee siyaasee Haalaat jo keh andohnaak aor qaabil-e-muzammat haiN. Haalaat kee is kashmakash meN shaae'ir kaa Hassaas dil mutaacir huwe baGhaer naheeN reh saktaa. yahee wajah hai keh aap kaa GudaaZ dil-o-dimaaGh Haalaat kee is kasheedagee ke tanazur meN naoHah kunaaN hai. aor kiyooN nah ho keh aap aek Hassaas shaa'ir haiN.
hameN alaam ki bohtat pe rona aaya
"roone waale tujhe kis baat peh roonaa aaya"
Waah! bajaa farmayaa hai.
paRhke aKhbaar harik baat pe rona aya
qaum aur mulk ke Halaat pe rona aaya
beshak!
Hadiya.e runj o alam haNs ke kiya hum ne qubool
HaN magar KhushiyoN ki sauGaat per rona aaya
jee jawaid bhaee yahee Haqeeqat hai.
aisa lagta hai zameer unka abhi zindah hai
jinko tareeKh ke SufHaat pe rona aaya
Waah Waah!
apne Halaat pe ik ashk bahaya nah kabhi
baarha auroN ke Halaat pe rona aaya
Bohot khoob Kiya kehne!
jinheN shak hota hai hubbul waTanee per meri
mujhe aisoN ke Khyaalaat pe rona aaya
Waah Waah!
tum tou haNste hi rahaa karte thEy :Jawaid: miyaN
aaj kya baat hi kis baat pe rona aaya
Bohot khoob Waah!
Jawaid bhaee meree jaanib se is Ghazal par dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
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Re: meri TaraHee Ghazal..........mushairah "January&quo
aik mufakkir hi aisee baateN kehsakta hai.jawaid badauni wrote:Yaraan.e mehfil, aadaab
Assalaam o alaikum
jawaid bhai saahib
kaisay haiN aap?
kisee bhee shayar ya muSannif ki taKhliqaat per Haalat.e zamanah ka aSar paRta hai.
jee...bilkul sahi farmaaya aapnay.
iss baar meri Ghazal maujoodah Halaat se kuch ziyadah hi mutaAssir ho gaii hai, jiske liye maAzrat Khuwaah hooN.
yeh tau bahut acchee baat hai.......aap apnay qalam ka haq ada kar rahay haiN.
aaj maiN ne apne dil ki bat kahee hai so Ghazal jaise bhi hai bardasht kar lijiye.
hum tayyaar haiN....ata keejiye.
Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid Badauni
hameN alaam ki bohtat pe rona aaya
"roone waale tujhe kis baat peh roonaa aaya"
paRhke aKhbaar harik baat pe rona aya
qaum aur mulk ke Halaat pe rona aaya
Hadiya.e runj o alam haNs ke kiya hum ne qubool
HaN magar KhushiyoN ki sauGaat per rona aaya
aisa lagta hai zameer unka abhi zindah hai
jinko tareeKh ke SufHaat pe rona aaya
apne Halaat pe ik ashk bahaya nah kabhi
baarha auroN ke Halaat pe rona aaya
jinheN shak hota hai hubbul waTanee per meri
mujhe aisoN ke Khyaalaat pe rona aaya
tum tou haNste hi rahaa karte thEy :Jawaid: miyaN
aaj kya baat hi kis baat pe rona aaya
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is munfarid kaavish per hamaari dilee daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmaayeN.
allah(sbhnwt)karay zoray qalam aur ziyaadah.
aapka apna
haamidbaqari
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:moHtaram Biradaram Jawaid Badauni SaaHib tasleemaat!
Ummeed hai kheriyat se hooN ge. mushae'rah meN aap kee shirkat baae'ic-e-iftekhaar hai. tashreef aawaree ke liye aap kaa teh-e-dil se mamnoon hooN. khush raheeN.
Guzarish#36 ke liye aap ke asha'aar dekhne kee taofeeq milee. sabhee asha'aar aap ke jazbah-e-Hubbul wat^anaee kaa barmalaa iz^haar kar rahe haiN aap ne baRee chabak dastee se Haalaat-e-haaZ^irah kee taSweer kashee kee hai. mulkee siyaasee Haalaat jo keh andohnaak aor qaabil-e-muzammat haiN. Haalaat kee is kashmakash meN shaae'ir kaa Hassaas dil mutaacir huwe baGhaer naheeN reh saktaa. yahee wajah hai keh aap kaa GudaaZ dil-o-dimaaGh Haalaat kee is kasheedagee ke tanazur meN naoHah kunaaN hai. aor kiyooN nah ho keh aap aek Hassaas shaa'ir haiN.
hameN alaam ki bohtat pe rona aaya
"roone waale tujhe kis baat peh roonaa aaya"
Waah! bajaa farmayaa hai.
paRhke aKhbaar harik baat pe rona aya
qaum aur mulk ke Halaat pe rona aaya
beshak!
Hadiya.e runj o alam haNs ke kiya hum ne qubool
HaN magar KhushiyoN ki sauGaat per rona aaya
jee jawaid bhaee yahee Haqeeqat hai.
aisa lagta hai zameer unka abhi zindah hai
jinko tareeKh ke SufHaat pe rona aaya
Waah Waah!
apne Halaat pe ik ashk bahaya nah kabhi
baarha auroN ke Halaat pe rona aaya
Bohot khoob Kiya kehne!
jinheN shak hota hai hubbul waTanee per meri
mujhe aisoN ke Khyaalaat pe rona aaya
Waah Waah!
tum tou haNste hi rahaa karte thEy :Jawaid: miyaN
aaj kya baat hi kis baat pe rona aaya
Bohot khoob Waah!
Jawaid bhaee meree jaanib se is Ghazal par dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
Biratharam Muzaffar Saahab
aadaab
Ghazal ki bharpur pazeeraayee ke liye mamnoon hooN. Hasb-e dastoor aap ke kalamaat meri himmat afzaaye ka sabab bane haiN. maiN kafi din tak in chaupaaloN se Gaaib raha. Shadeed zaati maSroofiyaat haaiil theeN ab insha Allah aamad-jaamad rahegee.
Is zameen meN aap ki ghazal abhi dekhi hai Insha Allah jald hi apni aara aapki Khidmat meN irsaal karoonga.
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Jawaid Badauni
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Re: meri TaraHee Ghazal..........mushairah "January&
haamidbaaqri wrote:aik mufakkir hi aisee baateN kehsakta hai.jawaid badauni wrote:Yaraan.e mehfil, aadaab
Assalaam o alaikum
jawaid bhai saahib
kaisay haiN aap?
kisee bhee shayar ya muSannif ki taKhliqaat per Haalat.e zamanah ka aSar paRta hai.
jee...bilkul sahi farmaaya aapnay.
iss baar meri Ghazal maujoodah Halaat se kuch ziyadah hi mutaAssir ho gaii hai, jiske liye maAzrat Khuwaah hooN.
yeh tau bahut acchee baat hai.......aap apnay qalam ka haq ada kar rahay haiN.
aaj maiN ne apne dil ki bat kahee hai so Ghazal jaise bhi hai bardasht kar lijiye.
hum tayyaar haiN....ata keejiye.
Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid Badauni
hameN alaam ki bohtat pe rona aaya
"roone waale tujhe kis baat peh roonaa aaya"
paRhke aKhbaar harik baat pe rona aya
qaum aur mulk ke Halaat pe rona aaya
Hadiya.e runj o alam haNs ke kiya hum ne qubool
HaN magar KhushiyoN ki sauGaat per rona aaya
aisa lagta hai zameer unka abhi zindah hai
jinko tareeKh ke SufHaat pe rona aaya
apne Halaat pe ik ashk bahaya nah kabhi
baarha auroN ke Halaat pe rona aaya
jinheN shak hota hai hubbul waTanee per meri
mujhe aisoN ke Khyaalaat pe rona aaya
tum tou haNste hi rahaa karte thEy :Jawaid: miyaN
aaj kya baat hi kis baat pe rona aaya
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is munfarid kaavish per hamaari dilee daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmaayeN.
allah(sbhnwt)karay zoray qalam aur ziyaadah.
aapka apna
haamidbaqari
Azeezi Haamid Baaqri Saahab
aadaab
aap se mulaqaat kabhi kabhi hoti hai magar behud luTf andoz hota hooN aap ki guftagoo se. Aaj phir aap ne behud Khuloos ke saath meri ghazal ki pazeeraayee ki hai jiske liye aap ka mamnoon hooN. Allah aap ko shaad.o.aabaad rakhkhe.
Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid