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jawaid badauni
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ik bhikari kah raha tha tera kya reh jayega
jo faqeeroN ko diya bus woh bachaa reh jayega
kis meN dum hai waqt ki aaNdhee kare gee faiSlah
"jis diye meN jaan ho gee woh diyaa reh jaaeY gaa"
Khoon.e Haq taareeKh ke auraaq se miT’ta nahiN
muddatoN tak daagh SafHoN per laga reh jayega
yeh makaN yeh gaaRiyaaN yeh teri ooper ki kamaii
tou chala jayega sub ka sub dhara reh jayega
beTiyaN pehneNgee aglee nasl ki aisa libaas
baap bechara bus un ko dekhta reh jayega
ai musafir humsafar hoN ge nah rehbar tere sath
Khaar rah jayeNge purKham rasta rah jayega
kaise ai :Jawaid: unke Gham ka daman choR dooN
zindage meN meri phir jine ko kya reh jayega
aapki giraNqadr aara ka muntazir,
Jawaid Badauni
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muhammad_19k
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Jawaid SaHeb,
kaafi 'arSaa ke b'aad Haazir huwaa hooN. laikin yaqeen hai ke meN ab bhi aap ki duaooN men hooN ga.
ghazal bohat achhchi hai aor maqta' shaandaar. daad qubool kijiaye.
mukhliS,
kaafi 'arSaa ke b'aad Haazir huwaa hooN. laikin yaqeen hai ke meN ab bhi aap ki duaooN men hooN ga.
ghazal bohat achhchi hai aor maqta' shaandaar. daad qubool kijiaye.
mukhliS,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.
+92 321 4435273
938-C-Faisal Town, Lahore.
Pakistan.
+92 42 111516516
muhammad_19k@hotmail.com
+92 321 4435273
938-C-Faisal Town, Lahore.
Pakistan.
+92 42 111516516
muhammad_19k@hotmail.com
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sbashwar
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Jawaid Saheb
ik bhikari kah raha tha tera kya reh jayega
jo faqeeroN ko diya bus woh bachaa reh jayega
Sheir haqeeqat par mubni hai. Wah
kis meN dum hai waqt ki aaNdhee kare gee faiSlah
"jis diye meN jaan ho gee woh diyaa reh jaaeY gaa"
Bohat khoob
Khoon.e Haq taareeKh ke auraaq se miT’ta nahiN
muddatoN tak daagh SafHoN per laga reh jayega
Bohat achcha sheir hai. Wah
yeh makaN yeh gaaRiyaaN yeh teri ooper ki kamaii
tou chala jayega sub ka sub dhara reh jayega
Kash hamari ankhein khuli. Wah
beTiyaN pehneNgee aglee nasl ki aisa libaas
baap bechara bus un ko dekhta reh jayega
Allah hidayat de hamari nayi nasl ko. Wah
ai musafir humsafar hoN ge nah rehbar tere sath
Khaar rah jayeNge purKham rasta rah jayega
Wah
kaise ai :Jawaid: unke Gham ka daman choR dooN
zindage meN meri phir jine ko kya reh jayega
Wah Wah.
Har sheir qabil-e-daad. Meri dili mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.
ik bhikari kah raha tha tera kya reh jayega
jo faqeeroN ko diya bus woh bachaa reh jayega
Sheir haqeeqat par mubni hai. Wah
kis meN dum hai waqt ki aaNdhee kare gee faiSlah
"jis diye meN jaan ho gee woh diyaa reh jaaeY gaa"
Bohat khoob
Khoon.e Haq taareeKh ke auraaq se miT’ta nahiN
muddatoN tak daagh SafHoN per laga reh jayega
Bohat achcha sheir hai. Wah
yeh makaN yeh gaaRiyaaN yeh teri ooper ki kamaii
tou chala jayega sub ka sub dhara reh jayega
Kash hamari ankhein khuli. Wah
beTiyaN pehneNgee aglee nasl ki aisa libaas
baap bechara bus un ko dekhta reh jayega
Allah hidayat de hamari nayi nasl ko. Wah
ai musafir humsafar hoN ge nah rehbar tere sath
Khaar rah jayeNge purKham rasta rah jayega
Wah
kaise ai :Jawaid: unke Gham ka daman choR dooN
zindage meN meri phir jine ko kya reh jayega
Wah Wah.
Har sheir qabil-e-daad. Meri dili mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.
سالم احمد باشوار
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jawaid badauni
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jawaid badauni
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sbashwar wrote:Jawaid Saheb
ik bhikari kah raha tha tera kya reh jayega
jo faqeeroN ko diya bus woh bachaa reh jayega
Sheir haqeeqat par mubni hai. Wah
kis meN dum hai waqt ki aaNdhee kare gee faiSlah
"jis diye meN jaan ho gee woh diyaa reh jaaeY gaa"
Bohat khoob
Khoon.e Haq taareeKh ke auraaq se miT’ta nahiN
muddatoN tak daagh SafHoN per laga reh jayega
Bohat achcha sheir hai. Wah
yeh makaN yeh gaaRiyaaN yeh teri ooper ki kamaii
tou chala jayega sub ka sub dhara reh jayega
Kash hamari ankhein khuli. Wah
beTiyaN pehneNgee aglee nasl ki aisa libaas
baap bechara bus un ko dekhta reh jayega
Allah hidayat de hamari nayi nasl ko. Wah
ai musafir humsafar hoN ge nah rehbar tere sath
Khaar rah jayeNge purKham rasta rah jayega
Wah
kaise ai :Jawaid: unke Gham ka daman choR dooN
zindage meN meri phir jine ko kya reh jayega
Wah Wah.
Har sheir qabil-e-daad. Meri dili mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.
Azeezi Salem Saahab, aadaab
aap ki daad himmat afzaaii ka sabab banee. Bohat bohat shukriya.
Pahle aap hameN Nazir SaaHab ki siHat ka Haal batate rehte thE aur unki Khairiyat se aagaah rakhte thE magar ab woh silsilah bhi aap ne jari nahiN rakhkha. Unse kahiye aap phir aana jana shuroo kar den unki kami bohat meHsoos hoto hai.
Ek baar phir aap ka shukriya.
MuKhliS
Jawaid
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jawaid badauni
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rukhsar wrote:jawaid badauni
sahib AADAB
aapki ek aur mea,ari ghazal ka muta.alaa kia
wah sahib waaaaaaaah bhut achchay ash,aar nikaalay hain
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beTiyaN pehneNgee aglee nasl ki aisa libaas
baap bechara bus un ko dekhta reh jayega
bhut achcha sher hay waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
daad qubool farmaaey
rukhsar
Aapki purKhulooS daad se meri himmat afzaai huuwee. Behud mamnoon hoon aap ka.
Ummid hai aaindah bhi rabt qaaiim rahega.
MuKhliS
Jawaid