Aadab ek ghazal hazir-e khidmat hay aapki aaraa ka intizaar rahayga
GHAZAL
jo mushkil raasta hay
vohi hum nay chounaa hay
kinaray par khRay ho
vo koi doobtaa hay
meray ander hi ander
vo kitnaa boltaa hay
faqat kirdaar hain hum
yeh sub likhkha hoa hay
koi manzil nahi to
yeh par kiun toltaa hay
har ek manzar nazar main
bhut bheega hoa hay
sanbhal jaengay aakhir
abhi dhachka lagaa hay
faqat ek dil hay apna
so vo khali paRaa hay
mohabbat chahtaa hay
ARY Pagal hoa hay
.....................
aara ka muntazir
Rukhsar
jo mushkil rastaa hay
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Re: jo mushkil rastaa hay
moHtaram Rukhsar SaaHib aadaab!rukhsar wrote:Aadab ek ghazal hazir-e khidmat hay aapki aaraa ka intizaar rahayga
GHAZAL
jo mushkil raasta hay
vohi hum nay chounaa hay
kinaray par khRay ho
vo koi doobtaa hay
meray ander hi ander
vo kitnaa boltaa hay
faqat kirdaar hain hum
yeh sub likhkha hoa hay
koi manzil nahi to
yeh par kiun toltaa hay
har ek manzar nazar main
bhut bheega hoa hay
sanbhal jaengay aakhir
abhi dhachka lagaa hay
faqat ek dil hay apna
so vo khali paRaa hay
mohabbat chahtaa hay
ARY Pagal hoa hay
.....................
aara ka muntazir
Rukhsar
kese mizaaj haiN? maiN baakheriyat hooN.
aap kee Ghazal dekhee kiyaa kehne aap ne waqa'ee bohot khubSurat asha'aar kahe haiN. meree jaanib se is khubSurat aor dilpazeer koshish par dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.
ummeed hai aae'ndah bhee tashreef late raheeN ge.
Wassalam
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Re: jo mushkil rastaa hay
Janab Rukhsaar SaHeb,
aadaab. aap ki ghazal bohat shaandaar aor pur acar hai mubaarak baad qubool kijiaye. ashaar ka inifiraadi acar ye rahaa.
jo mushkil raasta hay
vohi hum nay chounaa hay-------------------------------------bohat khoob.
kinaray par khRay ho
vo koi doobtaa hay----------------------------------------------bohat khoob.
meray ander hi ander
vo kitnaa boltaa hay--------------------------------------------zabardast.
laikin ye andar hi andaar wali baat kyaa hoee. Sirf aek andar kaafi nahi thaa?
faqat kirdaar hain hum
yeh sub likhkha hoa hay-----------------------------------------ye bohat saadaa sher aor 'aam khyaal hai.
koi manzil nahi to
yeh par kiun toltaa hay------------------------------------------ye kon? is ki waZaHat nhi hoti
har ek manzar nazar main
bhut bheega hoa hay---------------------------------------------zabardast.
sanbhal jaengay aakhir
abhi dhachka lagaa hay------------------------------------------bohat khoob.
abhi Sadma nayaa hai. is ke baarey men kyaa khyaal hai aap ka?
faqat ek dil hay apna
so vo khali paRaa hay-----------------------------------------------theek.
mohabbat chahtaa hay
ARY Pagal hoa hay--------------------------------------------------zabardast.
mukhliS,
aadaab. aap ki ghazal bohat shaandaar aor pur acar hai mubaarak baad qubool kijiaye. ashaar ka inifiraadi acar ye rahaa.
jo mushkil raasta hay
vohi hum nay chounaa hay-------------------------------------bohat khoob.
kinaray par khRay ho
vo koi doobtaa hay----------------------------------------------bohat khoob.
meray ander hi ander
vo kitnaa boltaa hay--------------------------------------------zabardast.
laikin ye andar hi andaar wali baat kyaa hoee. Sirf aek andar kaafi nahi thaa?
faqat kirdaar hain hum
yeh sub likhkha hoa hay-----------------------------------------ye bohat saadaa sher aor 'aam khyaal hai.
koi manzil nahi to
yeh par kiun toltaa hay------------------------------------------ye kon? is ki waZaHat nhi hoti
har ek manzar nazar main
bhut bheega hoa hay---------------------------------------------zabardast.
sanbhal jaengay aakhir
abhi dhachka lagaa hay------------------------------------------bohat khoob.
abhi Sadma nayaa hai. is ke baarey men kyaa khyaal hai aap ka?
faqat ek dil hay apna
so vo khali paRaa hay-----------------------------------------------theek.
mohabbat chahtaa hay
ARY Pagal hoa hay--------------------------------------------------zabardast.
mukhliS,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.
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+92 321 4435273
938-C-Faisal Town, Lahore.
Pakistan.
+92 42 111516516
muhammad_19k@hotmail.com