Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

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APNAA

apnaa aHvaal-e-dil-e-zaar, kahuuN yaa na kahuuN?
hai Hayaa man'e-e-izhaar, kahuuN yaa na kahuuN?


Ghaalib

lafze-e-"hai" ya "kahuuN" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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hai

hai dil ke liye maut masheenoN ki Hukoomat
ahsaas-e-muravvat ko kuchal dete haiN aalaat

aHsaas ya aalaat :D
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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AI'HSAAS

ai'Hsaas 'inaayat kar aasaar-e-musiibat kaa
im-roz kii shorish meN andesha-e-fardaa de!


'allamah Iqbaal

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de

de daad ae falak dil-e-Hasrat parast ko
haaN kuch na kuch talaafi-e-maafaat chaahiye

ghalib
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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CHAAHIYE

chaahiye achchhoN ko jitnaa chaahiye
yeh agar chaaheN to phir kia chaahiye!


Ghaalib

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yeh na thi hamaari qismat ke visaal-e-yaar hota
agar aur jeete rehte yehi intizaar hota

ghalib
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AGAR

agar-cheh thaa yeh iraada, magar Khuda kaa shukr
uThaa sakaa na nazaakat se gul_badan takiiya!


Ghaalib

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uthaa ker toR Daala aaiina Husn-e-raqaabat se
wo kal is per bigaR baiThe ke ham sa doosra kyuN ho
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
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WO

wo dil ko churaa kar jo lage aaNkh churaane
yaaroN kaa gayaa un pe bharam aur ziyaada

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Shummu wrote:WO

wo dil ko churaa kar jo lage aaNkh churaane
yaaroN kaa gayaa un pe bharam aur ziyaada
salaam Shummu,

is she'r ko paRh kar dil hil kar rah gayaa. is she'r se kitnii yaadeN joRii huii haiN, hai na?

Khair, is laRii ko aage baRhaate huye yeh she'r pesh-e-Khidmat hai:


yaaroN

yaaro Khataa mu'aaf karo, maiN nashe meN huN
sheeshe meN mai, mai meN nashaa, maiN nashe meN huuN!


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hooN garmi-e-nishaat-e-tasavvur se naghma saNj
maiN andaleeb-e-gulshan, na.aafreeda hooN

ghalib
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maiN

maiN huN aur afsurdagii kii aarzoo, "Ghaalib!", ki dil
dekh kar tarz-e-tapaak-e-ai'hl-e-duniyaa jal gayaa!


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dekh to dil se ke jaaN se uThta hai
ye dhuaaN sa kahaaN se uThta hai

Meer
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yeh

yeh masaa'il-e-tasavvuf, yeh tiraa bayaan, "Ghaalib!"
tujhe ham walii samajhte jo na baadah_Khowaar hotaa!


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hotaa hai nihaaN gard meiNn sehraa mere hote
ghistaa hai jabeeN Khaak pe daryaa mere aage

ghistaa ya aage

ghalib
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