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EK GAZAL: mat uTha apne aastaane se=G4

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sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.
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waaaah waaaaaaah waaaaah =D> =D> =D>

Mashallah!! subHaan Allah

aik aik sh'er daad kaa mustaHq hai. Najma ji aap ne tau meHfil loot li hai.

kayaa baat hai. dilee daad -o-teHseen qabul fermaaiN.

wassalam
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salaam Najma saaHiba,

aapkii taraHii Ghazal nazar_guzar huii aur maiN ne ise bahot bahot pasand kiyaa...aasaan zabaan aur seedhe andaaz meN apnii fikr ko she'rii jaama pahnaane meN aap kaamiyaab rahii haiN. sabhi ash'aar ek hii paaye ke haiN, ya'ni sabhi achchhe haiN.

aazmaaye ko aazmaane se!

hmmm...yaqeenan!

aazmooda ra aazmoodan, jehl ast :-)

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tahira Masood wrote:waaaah waaaaaaah waaaaah =D> =D> =D>

Mashallah!! subHaan Allah

aik aik sh'er daad kaa mustaHq hai. Najma ji aap ne tau meHfil loot li hai.

kayaa baat hai. dilee daad -o-teHseen qabul fermaaiN.

wassalam


tahira sahiba!!!!!!!!!!!!
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aap ko itneeeeeeeee pasand aaeeeeeeeeeeee :shock:
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bohat bohat aur bohat hi shukriya tahira!
sada khush rahiye
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najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.
:-)
Mohtarma Najma sahiba aap nay tarahee misray par buhat umdah ghazal likhi hai. Waisay tu tamam hi ashaar buhat achay hain taham shair no.2, 4 aur 6 khusisiat kay saath lajawab hain meri daad qabool kijiyay.
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sara_j wrote:
najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.
:-)
waah najma ji! asatiza tou aate rahenge lekin humaari daad qubool keejiye :rose .

bhai waah bohat khoob ghazal, maqta tou bohat hi zabardast hai.

sara j!
itni zabar dast daad ke liyey zabar dast shukriya bhi to wusool kijiye
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Najma baji

achi ghazal hai

daad qubool kjiye :)

amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.
:-)
TooT jaataa hai shisha.e.dil bhee
aik ummeed TooT jaane se

waah, Najma jee, aap ne buhat khoob ghazal kahee hai.
ye she'r buhat pasaNd aayaa,
daad qubool kijiye!

mukhliS
Naheed
p.s. aap kaa ye she'r paRh kar be.ikhteyaar gaanaa yaad aa geyaa "sheesha ho yaa dil ho aakhir TooT jaataa hai :) "
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Hashmat Usmani wrote:salaam Najma saaHiba,

aapkii taraHii Ghazal nazar_guzar huii aur maiN ne ise bahot bahot pasand kiyaa...aasaan zabaan aur seedhe andaaz meN apnii fikr ko she'rii jaama pahnaane meN aap kaamiyaab rahii haiN. sabhi ash'aar ek hii paaye ke haiN, ya'ni sabhi achchhe haiN.

aazmaaye ko aazmaane se!

hmmm...yaqeenan!

aazmooda ra aazmoodan, jehl ast :-)

Hashmat

bohat shukriya is hausla afzaaee aur pasandeedgii ka, biradaram!
mamnoon hooN
khair andesh
najma
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Anis Hasan wrote:
najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.
:-)
Mohtarma Najma sahiba aap nay tarahee misray par buhat umdah ghazal likhi hai. Waisay tu tamam hi ashaar buhat achay hain taham shair no.2, 4 aur 6 khusisiat kay saath lajawab hain meri daad qabool kijiyay.



anis hasan sahib!

aapki be-had mamnoon hooN keaap ne meri kawish pasand kii.
shukriya qubool farmaiye
aur khush rahiye
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Ibn-e-siddique wrote:Najma baji

achi ghazal hai

daad qubool kjiye :)

amjad

azizam amjad!
aapka bohat shukriya keh aap ne meri ye kawish bhi pasand kii.
khush rahiye
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waah waah

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waah waah Najma sahiba aapka aik aik sher murassa hai, aur aapki kuhnamashqi ka suboot bhi. bahut khooob .
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Re: EK GAZAL: mat uTha apne aastaane se=G4

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naheedv wrote:
najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.
:-)
TooT jaataa hai shisha.e.dil bhee
aik ummeed TooT jaane se

waah, Najma jee, aap ne buhat khoob ghazal kahee hai.
ye she'r buhat pasaNd aayaa,
daad qubool kijiye!

mukhliS
Naheed
p.s. aap kaa ye she'r paRh kar be.ikhteyaar gaanaa yaad aa geyaa "sheesha ho yaa dil ho aakhir TooT jaataa hai :) "




naheed v sahiba
bohat shukriya ke apko meri ye ghazal pasand aaee.
hausla afzaaee ke liye mamnoon hooN.
khush rahiye
najma
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naheedv wrote:
najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.
:-)
TooT jaataa hai shisha.e.dil bhee
aik ummeed TooT jaane se

waah, Najma jee, aap ne buhat khoob ghazal kahee hai.
ye she'r buhat pasaNd aayaa,
daad qubool kijiye!

mukhliS
Naheed
p.s. aap kaa ye she'r paRh kar be.ikhteyaar gaanaa yaad aa geyaa "sheesha ho yaa dil ho aakhir TooT jaataa hai :) "

naheedv sahiba!
aoa
is khoobsoorat hausla-afzaaee ke liye be-had mamnoon hooN.

:shock:
((p.s. aap kaa ye she'r paRh kar be.ikhteyaar gaanaa yaad aa geyaa "sheesha ho yaa dil ho aakhir TooT jaataa hai :) "[/quote]))

mujhe gane yaad hi nahi rehte :( aur acha laga keh mere she,r par aap ni kisi achay shair ke gane ke she,r ka hawala diya
khair andesh
najma
:-)
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Najma SaaHiba, aadaab :)

janaab , aap ki konsee aisee Ghazal hai jo zehn-0-dil par qayaamat na Dhaati ho ? :roll: :roll: :shock:
aap ka jitnaa bhi kalaam abtak nazar se guzraa hai , ham Sirf masHoor hi hote rahe , aek aek she'ar dil maiN utar jaataa hai !! :grin:

aap ki ye Ghazal bhi qayaamat-khez hai !! , tamaam ash'aar hi Ghazab k haiN , meeri jaanib se daad qabool kejeye. shukriya :-)

moKhliS: Zia Baloch :-)
Dikhaadi shaan, phir ahl-e-chaman ko, Be-niyaazi ki

Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne

Zia Baloch
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