aapkii taraHii Ghazal nazar_guzar huii aur maiN ne ise bahot bahot pasand kiyaa...aasaan zabaan aur seedhe andaaz meN apnii fikr ko she'rii jaama pahnaane meN aap kaamiyaab rahii haiN. sabhi ash'aar ek hii paaye ke haiN, ya'ni sabhi achchhe haiN.
najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.
Mohtarma Najma sahiba aap nay tarahee misray par buhat umdah ghazal likhi hai. Waisay tu tamam hi ashaar buhat achay hain taham shair no.2, 4 aur 6 khusisiat kay saath lajawab hain meri daad qabool kijiyay.
aapkii taraHii Ghazal nazar_guzar huii aur maiN ne ise bahot bahot pasand kiyaa...aasaan zabaan aur seedhe andaaz meN apnii fikr ko she'rii jaama pahnaane meN aap kaamiyaab rahii haiN. sabhi ash'aar ek hii paaye ke haiN, ya'ni sabhi achchhe haiN.
aazmaaye ko aazmaane se!
hmmm...yaqeenan!
aazmooda ra aazmoodan, jehl ast
Hashmat
bohat shukriya is hausla afzaaee aur pasandeedgii ka, biradaram!
mamnoon hooN
khair andesh
najma
najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.
Mohtarma Najma sahiba aap nay tarahee misray par buhat umdah ghazal likhi hai. Waisay tu tamam hi ashaar buhat achay hain taham shair no.2, 4 aur 6 khusisiat kay saath lajawab hain meri daad qabool kijiyay.
anis hasan sahib!
aapki be-had mamnoon hooN keaap ne meri kawish pasand kii.
shukriya qubool farmaiye
aur khush rahiye
janaab , aap ki konsee aisee Ghazal hai jo zehn-0-dil par qayaamat na Dhaati ho ?
aap ka jitnaa bhi kalaam abtak nazar se guzraa hai , ham Sirf masHoor hi hote rahe , aek aek she'ar dil maiN utar jaataa hai !!
aap ki ye Ghazal bhi qayaamat-khez hai !! , tamaam ash'aar hi Ghazab k haiN , meeri jaanib se daad qabool kejeye. shukriya
moKhliS: Zia Baloch
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