tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein;guz #5

[zaamin]

kyaa alam dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein

terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein

tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein

bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein

yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein

rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein

tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein

jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein

mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein

zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein

terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]

[crcd]

kyaa azar dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein

terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein

tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein

bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein

yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein

rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein

tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein

jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein

mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein

zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein

terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]

aadaab,

ghazal mujhe achi baqi, par pehla shair kuch waa'zay keejeeye plz....

khair andesh,
crcd


kyaa azar dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein

kya?[ kiya?] azaar [takleef?]
tera apna jab kabhi ayaa karey? karein?

[zaamin]

kyaa azar dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein

terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein

tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein

bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein

yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein

rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein

tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein

jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein

mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein

zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein

terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]

aadaab,

ghazal mujhe achi baqi, par pehla shair kuch waa'zay keejeeye plz....

khair andesh,
crcd


kyaa azar dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein

kya?[ kiya?] azaar [takleef?]
tera apna jab kabhi ayaa karey? karein?

ji crcd ji

azar ko aap kih rai mutabiq theekkar diyaa hai;azaar behr ke mutabiq na chalega;
kyaa ke k per harkat nahin aa saktii ;k is lafz main saakin hai;aur karein ka matlab jahaan yeh hai kih yeh jo mera dil hai,tera apna hai,jab chaho chale aayo;aur tarahi misra bhii yahii demand karta hai
aap ki paziraaii ke liye mamnoon hoon

zaamin

[najma]

kyaa alam dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein

terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein

tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein

bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein

yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein

rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein

tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein

jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein

mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein

zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein

terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]

achi koshish hay, zaminsahib!
allaah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyada
khush rahiye

[zaamin]

kyaa alam dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein

terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein

tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein

bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein

yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein

rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein

tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein

jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein

mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein

zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein

terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]

achi koshish hay, zaminsahib!
allaah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyada
khush rahiye

mohtaram najma sahiba:

aap ne waqt nikala aur merii is koshish ko parhaa aur apni rae dii,mamnoon hoon;aainda bhiaa rahnumaaii ata farmaate rahein

zaamin

[najma]

kyaa alam dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein

terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein

tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein

bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein

yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein

rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein

tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein

jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein

mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein

zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein

terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]

achi koshish hay, zaminsahib!
allaah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyada
khush rahiye

mohtaram najma sahiba:

aap ne waqt nikala aur merii is koshish ko parhaa aur apni rae dii,mamnoon hoon;aainda bhiaa rahnumaaii ata farmaate rahein

zaamin

jii zaroor insha allaah
aap bhi zaroor apni nigarishaat se nawazte rahiye
khush rahiye