EK GHAZAL=SUNTE HAIN, RAQEEBON SE MULAAQAAT KARO HO
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Bahut khoob
MuHtarama
Najma Saahibah,
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Mujhe tou achchi TaraH se nazar aarahi hei aur beHad pasand aayii.
Pahle souchaa ke is ghazal per tafseeli tabsirah karuN aur uski aek copy bhii apne computer per naql karlii. Raftah raftah aek aek sheAr paRhtaa gayaa. Bahut hii luTf aayaa. Bahut hii khoobsoorat aur dilkash ghazal hei.
Is liye yeh mukhtasar saa tabSirah pesh karne per majboor hougayaa.
Meri jaanib se dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmayiye. Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhii aapko isi TaraH daste_e_kamal Haasil rahegaa.
Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
saathiyo!
aadaab
aap meiN se kuch saathii hamarii ghazal ko urdu
hamarre kuch saathiyoN, khusuusi taur pe waqar sahib najm sahib aur khurram ko hamari ye ghazal urdu meiN nazar nahii aasakii, lihaza ab ham, un ke hukm ki ta,meel meiN, ise roman meiN bhi pesh kar rahay haiN.
sunte haiN, raqeeboN se mulaaqaat karo ho
phir jee ko jalane ki wohii baat karo ho
mazloom ko soolii pe chaRhaa dete haiN haalaat
aiy dosto! kya shikwa-e-haalaat karo ho
karne ko maiN wa,doN pe yaqeeN kalooN tumhaare
har roz magar tum to naee baat karo ho
is darjah sulagte huey mausim meiN bhi logo!
zIndah ho agar tum, to karamaat karo ho
jannat se nikaale huey insaan ke beTo!
dunyaa ko bhi dunyaa-e-kharaabaat karo ho
apnoN ki sii chaahat hay na GhairoN ki sii nafrat
dunya se niraalii hii har-ik baat karo ho
saawan ka guzartaa hua baadal tha wo NAJMA!
tum jis ke liye ash,koN ki barsaat karo ho
NAJMA ANSAR NAJMA
aadaab
aap meiN se kuch saathii hamarii ghazal ko urdu
hamarre kuch saathiyoN, khusuusi taur pe waqar sahib najm sahib aur khurram ko hamari ye ghazal urdu meiN nazar nahii aasakii, lihaza ab ham, un ke hukm ki ta,meel meiN, ise roman meiN bhi pesh kar rahay haiN.
sunte haiN, raqeeboN se mulaaqaat karo ho
phir jee ko jalane ki wohii baat karo ho
mazloom ko soolii pe chaRhaa dete haiN haalaat
aiy dosto! kya shikwa-e-haalaat karo ho
karne ko maiN wa,doN pe yaqeeN kalooN tumhaare
har roz magar tum to naee baat karo ho
is darjah sulagte huey mausim meiN bhi logo!
zIndah ho agar tum, to karamaat karo ho
jannat se nikaale huey insaan ke beTo!
dunyaa ko bhi dunyaa-e-kharaabaat karo ho
apnoN ki sii chaahat hay na GhairoN ki sii nafrat
dunya se niraalii hii har-ik baat karo ho
saawan ka guzartaa hua baadal tha wo NAJMA!
tum jis ke liye ash,koN ki barsaat karo ho
NAJMA ANSAR NAJMA
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wahh..waah kia hi khusboorat andaaz haysunte haiN, raqeeboN se mulaaqaat karo ho
phir jee ko jalane ki wohii baat karo ho
agreed...100 percent agreed..very nice..daad qubool kejay..karne ko maiN wa,doN pe yaqeeN kalooN tumhaare
har roz magar tum to naee baat karo ho
saawan ka guzartaa hua baadal tha wo NAJMA!
tum jis ke liye ash,koN ki barsaat karo ho
buhut khoob...buhut khoob
najma ji ham to arz ker saktay hein ilteja ker saktay hein.hamari mein hukum denay ka damm kehan..aap nay hamari arz mani..ham aap kay mamnoon hein baqee reha keh ghazal ..to ji bus samjhyeee ham behek hi gaye parh ker.kia khubsoporat zameen hay..radeef ka to jawab nahi ..
accha ik baat mujhay samjhayee gaa
jannat se nikaale huey insaan ke beTo!
dunyaa ko bhi dunyaa-e-kharaabaat karo ho
yehan aap nay likha dunyaa e kharbaat...meray zehen mein ik lafz aya tha kharafaat..yani dunyaa e kharafaat... yeh meri na samjhi hay keh mein aisa soch betha..lekin kia agar yeh lafz yehan ata to ziada khubsoorat nahi tha.mein na wazn say waqif hoon na soray assraar o rumooz say mein nay sirf ik aam aur adna si baat kahi hay.ghazal majmoyee taur per buhut classsic hay.dheeeroon daad qubool kejay .
wassalam
niaz mand
waqar masood
hello
waqar sahib!
is bhar pur pazeeraaee ke liye bohat shukriya
barkhurdar!
aap jo bhi farmaiyye, ham use hukm ka hi darja dete haiN.aap hi kii hausla-afzaaee ne hameiN kuch mazeed kene ki quwwat dii hay.aap ki ham qadr karte haiN.
aap ne farmaya====
((yehan aap nay likha dunyaa e kharbaat...meray zehen mein ik lafz aya tha kharafaat..yani dunyaa e kharafaat... yeh meri na samjhi hay keh mein aisa soch betha..lekin kia agar yeh lafz yehan ata to ziada khubsoorat nahi tha.mein na wazn say waqif hoon na soray assraar o rumooz say mein nay sirf ik aam aur adna si baat kahi hay.ghazal majmoyee taur per buhut classsic hay.dheeeroon daad qubool kejay .))
arz hay keh
khurafaat ke ma.nii haiN==be-hoodah bateN
aur
kharaabaat ke ma,nii haiN==jooey-khanah
==shraab-khanah
==fa,haashii ka aDDa
ab aap ma,nii ke farq se dekh lijiyey keh yahaaN adam ke beToN ke liye kya lafz ziyada mauzooN hay.
yaqeen hay ke ab aap samajh gaey hongay hamara mo,aqqaf.
tabadila-e-khayal ke liye be-had mamnoon hooN.
bohat shukriya
sada khush rahiye
is bhar pur pazeeraaee ke liye bohat shukriya
barkhurdar!
aap jo bhi farmaiyye, ham use hukm ka hi darja dete haiN.aap hi kii hausla-afzaaee ne hameiN kuch mazeed kene ki quwwat dii hay.aap ki ham qadr karte haiN.
aap ne farmaya====
((yehan aap nay likha dunyaa e kharbaat...meray zehen mein ik lafz aya tha kharafaat..yani dunyaa e kharafaat... yeh meri na samjhi hay keh mein aisa soch betha..lekin kia agar yeh lafz yehan ata to ziada khubsoorat nahi tha.mein na wazn say waqif hoon na soray assraar o rumooz say mein nay sirf ik aam aur adna si baat kahi hay.ghazal majmoyee taur per buhut classsic hay.dheeeroon daad qubool kejay .))
arz hay keh
khurafaat ke ma.nii haiN==be-hoodah bateN
aur
kharaabaat ke ma,nii haiN==jooey-khanah
==shraab-khanah
==fa,haashii ka aDDa
ab aap ma,nii ke farq se dekh lijiyey keh yahaaN adam ke beToN ke liye kya lafz ziyada mauzooN hay.
yaqeen hay ke ab aap samajh gaey hongay hamara mo,aqqaf.
tabadila-e-khayal ke liye be-had mamnoon hooN.
bohat shukriya
sada khush rahiye
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najma wrote:waqar sahib!
is bhar pur pazeeraaee ke liye bohat shukriya
barkhurdar!
aap jo bhi farmaiyye, ham use hukm ka hi darja dete haiN.aap hi kii hausla-afzaaee ne hameiN kuch mazeed kene ki quwwat dii hay.aap ki ham qadr karte haiN.
aap ne farmaya====
((yehan aap nay likha dunyaa e kharbaat...meray zehen mein ik lafz aya tha kharafaat..yani dunyaa e kharafaat... yeh meri na samjhi hay keh mein aisa soch betha..lekin kia agar yeh lafz yehan ata to ziada khubsoorat nahi tha.mein na wazn say waqif hoon na soray assraar o rumooz say mein nay sirf ik aam aur adna si baat kahi hay.ghazal majmoyee taur per buhut classsic hay.dheeeroon daad qubool kejay .))
arz hay keh
khurafaat ke ma.nii haiN==be-hoodah bateN
aur
kharaabaat ke ma,nii haiN==jooey-khanah
==shraab-khanah
==fa,haashii ka aDDa
ab aap ma,nii ke farq se dekh lijiyey keh yahaaN adam ke beToN ke liye kya lafz ziyada mauzooN hay.
yaqeen hay ke ab aap samajh gaey hongay hamara mo,aqqaf.
tabadila-e-khayal ke liye be-had mamnoon hooN.
bohat shukriya
sada khush rahiye
aap ki baat samajh gia lekin her shair ka apna bhi ik nuqta e nazar bhi hota hay . mein shair to nahi hoon lekin bus dil mein ik khayal aya tha is terah keh agar mein is mafhoom mein kuch likhta to yeh lafz(kharafaat) use kerta beherhaal aap nay jo soch ker likha woh bilkul theek hay .aap ka shukria keh aap nay apnay khayal ki wazaahaat ker di.umeed hay aeenda bhi aap kay ilm o hunur say mustafeed honbay ka moqa milay ga.shukria
wassalam
hello
waqar_masood wrote:najma wrote:waqar sahib!
is bhar pur pazeeraaee ke liye bohat shukriya
barkhurdar!
aap jo bhi farmaiyye, ham use hukm ka hi darja dete haiN.aap hi kii hausla-afzaaee ne hameiN kuch mazeed kene ki quwwat dii hay.aap ki ham qadr karte haiN.
aap ne farmaya====
((yehan aap nay likha dunyaa e kharbaat...meray zehen mein ik lafz aya tha kharafaat..yani dunyaa e kharafaat... yeh meri na samjhi hay keh mein aisa soch betha..lekin kia agar yeh lafz yehan ata to ziada khubsoorat nahi tha.mein na wazn say waqif hoon na soray assraar o rumooz say mein nay sirf ik aam aur adna si baat kahi hay.ghazal majmoyee taur per buhut classsic hay.dheeeroon daad qubool kejay .))
arz hay keh
khurafaat ke ma.nii haiN==be-hoodah bateN
aur
kharaabaat ke ma,nii haiN==jooey-khanah
==shraab-khanah
==fa,haashii ka aDDa
ab aap ma,nii ke farq se dekh lijiyey keh yahaaN adam ke beToN ke liye kya lafz ziyada mauzooN hay.
yaqeen hay ke ab aap samajh gaey hongay hamara mo,aqqaf.
tabadila-e-khayal ke liye be-had mamnoon hooN.
bohat shukriya
sada khush rahiye
aap ki baat samajh gia lekin her shair ka apna bhi ik nuqta e nazar bhi hota hay . mein shair to nahi hoon lekin bus dil mein ik khayal aya tha is terah keh agar mein is mafhoom mein kuch likhta to yeh lafz(kharafaat) use kerta beherhaal aap nay jo soch ker likha woh bilkul theek hay .aap ka shukria keh aap nay apnay khayal ki wazaahaat ker di.umeed hay aeenda bhi aap kay ilm o hunur say mustafeed honbay ka moqa milay ga.shukria
wassalam
bohat shukriya waqar masood
isi tarah tabadla-e-khayal se ham bohat kuch seekhte haiN.
khush rahiye
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sara_j wrote:mazloom ko sooli pe charhaate hain halaat
aye dosto! kya shikwa'e halaat karo ho!
wah wah najma ji bohat khoob! bohat umdah ghazal kahi hai aapne.
is darja sulagte hue mausam mein bhi logo!
zinda ho agar tum to karaamat karo ho!
very beautiful!
saawan ka guzarta hua baadal tha voh Najma!
tum jiske liye ashkoN ki barsaat karo ho!
awesome! awesome!
waah Najma ji aapki ghazal bohat pasand aayi aur quoted shair humne baar baar parhe maza lete hue. dhair saari daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
sara
bohat shukriya sara jsahiba!
itniipazeeraaaee k qabil kahaaN haiN haam
lekin aapki is hausla afzaa tehreer ne hameN taqwiyyat bakhshii
khush rahiye
Re: EK GHAZAL=SUNTE HAIN, RAQEEBON SE MULAAQAAT KARO HO
Adaab, Najma Ji!najma wrote:sunte haiN, raqeeboN se mulaaqaat karo ho
phir jee ko jalane ki wohii baat karo ho
karne ko maiN wa,doN pe yaqeeN kalooN tumhaare
har roz magar tum to naee baat karo ho
saawan ka guzartaa hua baadal tha wo NAJMA!
tum jis ke liye ash,koN ki barsaat karo ho
NAJMA ANSAR NAJMA
Aap ki is ghazal ka to rang hi juda hay, bohot lutf aaya paRh kar. Sabhi ashaar ache heN, lekin quoted ashaar zyada pasand aaye, daad aur mubarakbaad pesh hay.
Re: Bahut khoob
WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarama
Najma Saahibah,
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Mujhe tou achchi TaraH se nazar aarahi hei aur beHad pasand aayii.
Pahle souchaa ke is ghazal per tafseeli tabsirah karuN aur uski aek copy bhii apne computer per naql karlii. Raftah raftah aek aek sheAr paRhtaa gayaa. Bahut hii luTf aayaa. Bahut hii khoobsoorat aur dilkash ghazal hei.
Is liye yeh mukhtasar saa tabSirah pesh karne per majboor hougayaa.
Meri jaanib se dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmayiye. Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhii aapko isi TaraH daste_e_kamal Haasil rahegaa.
Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
MuHtarama A.Nazir Sahib
aadaab
isqadar pazeeraaee aap se hasil huee hay.ye aapki zarrah-nawazii hay.
ham be-had mamnoon haiN aap ke
khair andesh
najma
Re: EK GHAZAL=SUNTE HAIN, RAQEEBON SE MULAAQAAT KARO HO
Anmol wrote:Adaab, Najma Ji!najma wrote:sunte haiN, raqeeboN se mulaaqaat karo ho
phir jee ko jalane ki wohii baat karo ho
karne ko maiN wa,doN pe yaqeeN kalooN tumhaare
har roz magar tum to naee baat karo ho
saawan ka guzartaa hua baadal tha wo NAJMA!
tum jis ke liye ash,koN ki barsaat karo ho
NAJMA ANSAR NAJMA
Aap ki is ghazal ka to rang hi juda hay, bohot lutf aaya paRh kar. Sabhi ashaar ache heN, lekin quoted ashaar zyada pasand aaye, daad aur mubarakbaad pesh hay.
anmol
tum ne itnaa pasand kiya hay, shukriya kehne ko alfaaz kahaaN se laaeiN?
bahar haal tumhari is hausla afzaee k liye ham be-had mamnoon haiN
sada khush raho