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Umeed he pasand aaye ga.
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Re: INTEHA
Steve Almas wrote:Azeezan-e-Mehfil
Tasleemat..
Taza kalam pesh-e-khidmat he.
Umeed he pasand aaye ga.
janab Steve Almas
aadaab
aapka kalam bohat hi paand aya.har she,r ek apna hi umdah andaaz aur khayal liye hay.
waah
dilii daad qubool kijiye
khair andesh
najma
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Sara JiAlmas ji,
Adaab arz hai.
waah! subh subh aapka kalaam dekh ker bohat khushi hui.
maine aapki hansti muskuraati tehreerein ziyada paRhi hain, is kavish ka zara mukhtalif rang hain.
ye andaaz bhi pasand aaya. bohat hi dilkush aur jazbaat se bharpoor is kavish per daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
shehr-e-afsos mien gul hue sab diiye
ghup andhera hai dushman hawaa hougayii
waah! bohat khoob!
haal-e-dil us se Almaas poocho zara
zindagi mil ke jis se khafa hougayii
bohat bohat khoob!
sara
Aadab
Pata nahein yeh ashaar khoobsoorat andaz mein hein ya nahein lekin aap ki himat afza daad zaroor hasb-e-ma'mool khoobsoorat he. Shukriya qabool kijiye.
Aap ka kehna baja he ke issey me ne gham-e-doran ke zer-e-asr munasbat se likh diya, aap ko pasand aaya to acha laga.
Abhi bhi kuch waqt ki kami rehti he iss liye kabhi der ho jaye to umeed he aap aour sab arbab-e-mehfil isse nazar andaz kerein ge
Shukriya
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Bahut khoob
MuHtaram
Steve Almas Saahib,
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Aapki ghazal majmooAi Taur per beHad pasand aayi jiske liye meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka rang-e-tghazzul din ba'din dilkash houtaa jaarahaa hei. Ummeed hei ke aapka safar-e-sukhan yooN hii jaari rahegaa aur ham ko aapkaa kalaam paRhne kaa mauqaA moyassar aataa rahegaa. Shukriyah.
Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
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Janab-e mohtaram Nazir SahabMuHtaram
Steve Almas Saahib,
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Aapki ghazal majmooAi Taur per beHad pasand aayi jiske liye meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka rang-e-tghazzul din ba'din dilkash houtaa jaarahaa hei. Ummeed hei ke aapka safar-e-sukhan yooN hii jaari rahegaa aur ham ko aapkaa kalaam paRhne kaa mauqaA moyassar aataa rahegaa. Shukriyah.
Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
Takheer ke liye m'azrat chahta hoon, aapki purkhuloos daad ka shukriya pesh kerney ki jasarat ker raha hoon. Yaqeen kijiye aap jaisey mukhlis logon ki sarprasti hamarey liye b'ais-e-izat he, aour nihait zaroori bhi. Gahe bagahe mulaqat hoti hi rahe gi.
Apna khayal rakhiye ga.
Aik baar phir se shukriya qabool kijiye
Steve Almas