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apni aik adna si kawish pesh kar rahi hoN aap ki aara ka intizaar rahey ga
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zmufti
1. ham bichar jaain kabhi to hamieN socha karna
hasraton se dar-o-deewar ko dekha karna
2. yaad jab aaoN to milne mujhe aaya karna
meri turbat ko gulaabon se sajaaya karna
3. zehr tanhaaii ka ashkoN meiN youN ghola karna
tum miri yaad mein chup chup ke bhi roya karna
4. shikva karna na kisi aur se uljhaa karna
tum mire baad faqat khud se hi rootha karna
5. tum sitaaroN meiN falak ke hamieN dhoonda karna
aur kabhi chaandni raaton mein na soya karna
6. bewafaai ki kabhi mujh pe na tohmat dharna
jo bhi kehti rahe dunya nahin parwaa karna
7. ab na karna koi daava-e-mohabbat hargiz
Phir nah is tarha kissi aur ko ruswa karna
Tum meray baad
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salaam
aapki asarangaiz ghazal parhi , bahut takleefda ehsasaat ko aapne sher ki surat mai dhaala hai. bahut khoob. baaz tekneeki bateiN qabile ghaur haiN ksi ustaad se nazr e saani karwa leiN to ghazal ka rang aur nikhar aayega.
shukria
Mahtab Qadr
salaam
aapki asarangaiz ghazal parhi , bahut takleefda ehsasaat ko aapne sher ki surat mai dhaala hai. bahut khoob. baaz tekneeki bateiN qabile ghaur haiN ksi ustaad se nazr e saani karwa leiN to ghazal ka rang aur nikhar aayega.
shukria
Mahtab Qadr