"ek din zamee.n pe"hamaari aik ghazal

Kuhnah mashq ShoAraa kaa kalaam jo beHr meiN hounaa zaroori hei

Moderator: Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar

Post Reply
User avatar
haamidbaaqri
-
-
Posts: 567
Joined: Tue Oct 11, 2005 10:50 am
Location: bangalore, india 00-91-9341253797
Contact:

"ek din zamee.n pe"hamaari aik ghazal

Post by haamidbaaqri »

salaamun alaikum
dosto,

arz kiya hai


"ek din zamee.n pe"


ek din zamee.n pe khuld se phenka gaya hame.n
auqaat apni kya hai bataya gaya hame.n

jo kuch bhi chahte the woh milta tha muft mei.n
anmol ne^amato.n se hataaya gaya hame.n

ek lamhe ki khata ki saza humko yu.n mili
dukh dard ke makaan mei.n bheja gaya hame.n

naadim hua jo dil yeh hamara khata ke baad
rahmat ki baarisho.n se bhigoya gaya hame.n

ammara nafs ke kabhie shaitaa.n rajeem ke
do dushmano.n ke beech mei.n daala gaya hame.n

in dushmano.n se har ghadi ladne ke waaste
panja namaaz padhna sikhaya gaya hame.n

eemaan aur nek amal se baqa mile
paigham yeh khuda ka sunaya gaya hame.n

haamid karoge fikr to miljaayega jawaab
kiswaaste jahaan mei.n bheja gaya hame.n

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah
Last edited by haamidbaaqri on Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:04 am, edited 1 time in total.
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
ehsaas
-
-
Posts: 32
Joined: Thu Aug 18, 2005 11:20 am
Location: unknown
Contact:

Post by ehsaas »

Haamid sahib

aap ki ghazal pasand ayee, accha likhtay hein aap .dua hay keh aur bhi accha likhein.ghazal share kernay ka shukria

wassalam
urdubandhan
User avatar
haamidbaaqri
-
-
Posts: 567
Joined: Tue Oct 11, 2005 10:50 am
Location: bangalore, india 00-91-9341253797
Contact:

shukriya

Post by haamidbaaqri »

ehsaas wrote:Haamid sahib

aap ki ghazal pasand ayee, accha likhtay hein aap .dua hay keh aur bhi accha likhein.ghazal share kernay ka shukria

wassalam
mohtaram ehsaas saahib
salaamun alaikum

aapne hamaari ghazal ko pasand kiya,saraaha aur daad bhi dee iskeliye hum aapke behad mamnoono mashkoor hai.n

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n ki baarish kare.aameen


khair andesh
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
User avatar
rahmed25682
-
-
Posts: 126
Joined: Thu Dec 09, 2004 8:28 am
Location: Karachi
Contact:

Post by rahmed25682 »

Salam HAAMID sahab ...

Aik achhy aur sachai se muzayyan ghazal share karnay ka bay-hadd shukriya ...

Khush rahain

Khair Andesh

Raheel Ahmed
Kab Say HooN , Kia BataaooN Jahan-e-Kharab Main
Shab-Haaye Hijr Ko Bhee RakhooN Gar Hisab Main
=============================
Ghalib
User avatar
Abdullah Nazir
-
-
Posts: 2681
Joined: Sat Dec 11, 2004 4:16 am
Location: Jeddah
Contact:

Bahut khoob

Post by Abdullah Nazir »


MuHtarami
[/u]Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,[/u]

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

Aapkke apne andaaz meiN likhkhaa houaa yeh kalaam bahut khoob hei.

Meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

Image
User avatar
haamidbaaqri
-
-
Posts: 567
Joined: Tue Oct 11, 2005 10:50 am
Location: bangalore, india 00-91-9341253797
Contact:

shukriya

Post by haamidbaaqri »

rahmed25682 wrote:Salam HAAMID sahab ...

Aik achhy aur sachai se muzayyan ghazal share karnay ka bay-hadd shukriya ...

Khush rahain

Khair Andesh

Raheel Ahmed
salaamun alaikum
mohtaram r ahmed saahib

bahut bahut shukriya duao.n ke liye.

aap bhi hamesha khush rahe.n .jazakallah

talibe dua
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
User avatar
haamidbaaqri
-
-
Posts: 567
Joined: Tue Oct 11, 2005 10:50 am
Location: bangalore, india 00-91-9341253797
Contact:

Re: Bahut khoob

Post by haamidbaaqri »

WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarami
[/u]Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,[/u]

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

Aapkke apne andaaz meiN likhkhaa houaa yeh kalaam bahut khoob hei.

Meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

salaamun alaikum
mohtaram abdullah nazir saahib

bahut bahut shukriya mohtaram.aapki purkhuloos daad hamare liye sanad hai.aapki dilee mubaarakbaad ke bhi hum behad shukrguzaar hai.n.

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni khaas nazre karam farmaaye aameen.


aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
Post Reply