Gazal (Guz. 18)
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jawaid badauni
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Gazal (Guz. 18)
Dosto!
Aadaab qubool kijiye
MaiN kal hi apni salanah rooKhsat se waapas aaya hooN. Ek arce bAAd Urdubandhan meN haazree lagaa rahaa hooN aur woh bhi naii tarahee Gazal ke saath. Ummid hai in sada ashAr ko aap pasaNd farmayeNge.
Aapka MuKhlis
Jawaid Badauni
Gazal
Door hooN manzil se maiN armaan bhi manzil ka hai
Aasra ab jo bhi hai bus jazba-e kaamil ka hai
MaiN tiree janib nah dekhooN zid hai mere zahn ki
Aur tira daaman na choRooN yeh taqaZah dil ka hai
Mil gaya humko bhi duniya meN shahaadat ka maqaam
Ek to ehsaan hum per baazoo.e qaaatil ka hai
Mustaqil such bolna aur woh bhi sub ke saamne
Tum nah kar paaoge yaro Kaam yeh mushkil ka hai
Aajkal ke rahrawoN kee bus yehee hai daastaN
Aabla paaii ka Gam hai shauq bhi manzil ka hai
Kaunsee nisbat mujhe hai tum se kya batlaaooN maiN
Tum nah samjhoge isey aaKhir yeh rishta dil ka hai
Iss tarah se ji rahee hai meri saaree qaum aaj
Kuch to hai maazi ka Gam kuch Khauf mustaqbil ka hai
Hazrat.e “Jawaid” kya aaye keh raunaq aa gaaii
Khood hi aakaer dekh lo tum Haal jo mehfil ka hai
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Abdullah Nazir
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Bahut khoob, waah waah
MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badauni SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aapki TaraHi ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Saare ashAaar hi laayiq-e-daad o teHseen hei aur khaaS Taur per aapka maqTaA jismeN aap ne is baat kaa izhaar farmaayaa hei ke aapke waapus aane se meHfil i raunq meiN iZaafah hougayaa hei. Shukriyah.
Aapkaa mukhliS,
Nazir.
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jawaid badauni
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Re: Bahut khoob, waah waah
WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badauni SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aapki TaraHi ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Saare ashAaar hi laayiq-e-daad o teHseen hei aur khaaS Taur per aapka maqTaA jismeN aap ne is baat kaa izhaar farmaayaa hei ke aapke waapus aane se meHfil i raunq meiN iZaafah hougayaa hei. Shukriyah.
Aapkaa mukhliS,
Nazir.
Mohtarmee Abdullah Nazir SaHib,
Aadaab
Aap ki daad sanad hai.Bohat himmat afzaaii hoti hai jab aap Ghazal per apnee graNqadr tahseen se nawazte haiN.
Behud mamnoon hooN.
MuKhlis
Jawaid Badauni
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hassan_bashir
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mohtaram Javed saaHib aadab arz hai!
aap kii mojudagii se bazm kii raunaqeiN vaaqaii dobaala ho gaii heiN jiska subuut kalaam ke maqte meiN ba-khubii zaahir hai.
hamesha hii tarah yeh kalaam bhii khub rahaa tamaam hii ash'aar umdah aur laaiq-e-sad tehseen heiN. khusuusan maqtaa behad pasaNd aaYaa.
eik kaamyaab koshsih par nachiiz kii jaanib se dilee daad-o-mubaarak baad qubuul keejiYe. :rose
Dua'aoN meiN yaad rakhiYe ga!
~ Hassan ~
aap kii mojudagii se bazm kii raunaqeiN vaaqaii dobaala ho gaii heiN jiska subuut kalaam ke maqte meiN ba-khubii zaahir hai.
hamesha hii tarah yeh kalaam bhii khub rahaa tamaam hii ash'aar umdah aur laaiq-e-sad tehseen heiN. khusuusan maqtaa behad pasaNd aaYaa.
eik kaamyaab koshsih par nachiiz kii jaanib se dilee daad-o-mubaarak baad qubuul keejiYe. :rose
Dua'aoN meiN yaad rakhiYe ga!
~ Hassan ~
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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jawaid badauni
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hassan_bashir wrote:mohtaram Javed saaHib aadab arz hai!
aap kii mojudagii se bazm kii raunaqeiN vaaqaii dobaala ho gaii heiN jiska subuut kalaam ke maqte meiN ba-khubii zaahir hai.
hamesha hii tarah yeh kalaam bhii khub rahaa tamaam hii ash'aar umdah aur laaiq-e-sad tehseen heiN. khusuusan maqtaa behad pasaNd aaYaa.
eik kaamyaab koshsih par nachiiz kii jaanib se dilee daad-o-mubaarak baad qubuul keejiYe. :rose
Dua'aoN meiN yaad rakhiYe ga!
~ Hassan ~
Mohtarme Hassan Sb., Tasleemaat
Ghazal ki pazeeeraaii aur purKhuloos daad.o.tahseen ke liye aap ka marhoon.e minnat hooN.
Khoosh raheN!
Nacheez,
Jawaid Badauni
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Re: Gazal (Guz. 18)
salaamun alaikumjawaid badauni wrote:
Dosto!
Aadaab qubool kijiye
MaiN kal hi apni salanah rooKhsat se waapas aaya hooN. Ek arce bAAd Urdubandhan meN haazree lagaa rahaa hooN aur woh bhi naii tarahee Gazal ke saath. Ummid hai in sada ashAr ko aap pasaNd farmayeNge.
Aapka MuKhlis
Jawaid Badauni
Gazal
Door hooN manzil se maiN armaan bhi manzil ka hai
Aasra ab jo bhi hai bus jazba-e kaamil ka hai
MaiN tiree janib nah dekhooN zid hai mere zahn ki
Aur tira daaman na choRooN yeh taqaZah dil ka hai
Mil gaya humko bhi duniya meN shahaadat ka maqaam
Ek to ehsaan hum per baazoo.e qaaatil ka hai
Mustaqil such bolna aur woh bhi sub ke saamne
Tum nah kar paaoge yaro Kaam yeh mushkil ka hai
Aajkal ke rahrawoN kee bus yehee hai daastaN
Aabla paaii ka Gam hai shauq bhi manzil ka hai
Kaunsee nisbat mujhe hai tum se kya batlaaooN maiN
Tum nah samjhoge isey aaKhir yeh rishta dil ka hai
Iss tarah se ji rahee hai meri saaree qaum aaj
Kuch to hai maazi ka Gam kuch Khauf mustaqbil ka hai
Hazrat.e “Jawaid” kya aaye keh raunaq aa gaaii
Khood hi aakaer dekh lo tum Haal jo mehfil ka hai
hamaare azeez bhaai jawaid saahib
hum pehle bhi is khoobsoorat ghazal per daad de chuke hai.n
phir aik baar aapki is munfarid takhleeq per daad haazir hai qubool farmaaye.n
aapka apna
haamidbaari
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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jawaid badauni
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Re: Gazal (Guz. 18)
haamidbaaqri wrote:salaamun alaikumjawaid badauni wrote:
Dosto!
Aadaab qubool kijiye
MaiN kal hi apni salanah rooKhsat se waapas aaya hooN. Ek arce bAAd Urdubandhan meN haazree lagaa rahaa hooN aur woh bhi naii tarahee Gazal ke saath. Ummid hai in sada ashAr ko aap pasaNd farmayeNge.
Aapka MuKhlis
Jawaid Badauni
Gazal
Door hooN manzil se maiN armaan bhi manzil ka hai
Aasra ab jo bhi hai bus jazba-e kaamil ka hai
MaiN tiree janib nah dekhooN zid hai mere zahn ki
Aur tira daaman na choRooN yeh taqaZah dil ka hai
Mil gaya humko bhi duniya meN shahaadat ka maqaam
Ek to ehsaan hum per baazoo.e qaaatil ka hai
Mustaqil such bolna aur woh bhi sub ke saamne
Tum nah kar paaoge yaro Kaam yeh mushkil ka hai
Aajkal ke rahrawoN kee bus yehee hai daastaN
Aabla paaii ka Gam hai shauq bhi manzil ka hai
Kaunsee nisbat mujhe hai tum se kya batlaaooN maiN
Tum nah samjhoge isey aaKhir yeh rishta dil ka hai
Iss tarah se ji rahee hai meri saaree qaum aaj
Kuch to hai maazi ka Gam kuch Khauf mustaqbil ka hai
Hazrat.e “Jawaid” kya aaye keh raunaq aa gaaii
Khood hi aakaer dekh lo tum Haal jo mehfil ka hai
hamaare azeez bhaai jawaid saahib
hum pehle bhi is khoobsoorat ghazal per daad de chuke hai.n
phir aik baar aapki is munfarid takhleeq per daad haazir hai qubool farmaaye.n
aapka apna
haamidbaari
Ek baar phir shukriya Haamid SaHib.
Allah aap ko shaad.o.aabaad rakhkhe, "aamin".
MuKhlis
Jawaid
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Mohtarmee wa azeezi Husaini SaHab,khozema husaini wrote:janaab jawaid saheb
aadaab aap ki Ghazal pasand aai meri janib se daad Haazir hai qubool farmayeN
husaini
Aap ki daad.o.taheen halaNkeh muKhtaCar hai magar mere liye izzat afzaaii aur himmat afzaaii ka bayaS banee hai. Bohat bohat shukriya.
Jawaid
Re: Gazal (Guz. 18)
Waah waah waah, har sher aik se baRh kar aik. Mazameen bhi Khoob aur andaaz-e-bayaaN bhi Khoob'tar. Meri jaanib se DheroN daad qubool kijiye, Jawaid Sahib.jawaid badauni wrote: Door hooN manzil se maiN armaan bhi manzil ka hai
Aasra ab jo bhi hai bus jazba-e kaamil ka hai
MaiN tiree janib nah dekhooN zid hai mere zahn ki
Aur tira daaman na choRooN yeh taqaZah dil ka hai
Mil gaya humko bhi duniya meN shahaadat ka maqaam
Ek to ehsaan hum per baazoo.e qaaatil ka hai
Mustaqil such bolna aur woh bhi sub ke saamne
Tum nah kar paaoge yaro Kaam yeh mushkil ka hai
Aajkal ke rahrawoN kee bus yehee hai daastaN
Aabla paaii ka Gam hai shauq bhi manzil ka hai
Iss tarah se ji rahee hai meri saaree qaum aaj
Kuch to hai maazi ka Gam kuch Khauf mustaqbil ka hai
Hazrat.e “Jawaid” kya aaye keh raunaq aa gaaii
Khood hi aakaer dekh lo tum Haal jo mehfil ka hai
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Re: Gazal (Guz. 18)
Anmol wrote:Waah waah waah, har sher aik se baRh kar aik. Mazameen bhi Khoob aur andaaz-e-bayaaN bhi Khoob'tar. Meri jaanib se DheroN daad qubool kijiye, Jawaid Sahib.jawaid badauni wrote: Door hooN manzil se maiN armaan bhi manzil ka hai
Aasra ab jo bhi hai bus jazba-e kaamil ka hai
MaiN tiree janib nah dekhooN zid hai mere zahn ki
Aur tira daaman na choRooN yeh taqaZah dil ka hai
Mil gaya humko bhi duniya meN shahaadat ka maqaam
Ek to ehsaan hum per baazoo.e qaaatil ka hai
Mustaqil such bolna aur woh bhi sub ke saamne
Tum nah kar paaoge yaro Kaam yeh mushkil ka hai
Aajkal ke rahrawoN kee bus yehee hai daastaN
Aabla paaii ka Gam hai shauq bhi manzil ka hai
Iss tarah se ji rahee hai meri saaree qaum aaj
Kuch to hai maazi ka Gam kuch Khauf mustaqbil ka hai
Hazrat.e “Jawaid” kya aaye keh raunaq aa gaaii
Khood hi aakaer dekh lo tum Haal jo mehfil ka hai
Bohat bohat shukriya Anmol SaHibah.
Der aayad durust aayd shayad isee ko kahte haiN.
Khair andesh
Jawaid