Mohtrim Suhail Malik sb, Assalam o allaikum! HoSla afzayee ka shukriya,Ap issi taraH HoSla afzayee farmatey rahey tau zaroor likh paooN ga issi taraH in sha Allah. w.s Akif Ghani Aakif Saaheb MashaAllah beyhad khubsurat, nihaet bamaqsad aur haqeeqat kay akas ashar kehay haiN aap nay. Is qadr maani ...

Munir Arman Naseemi jee, Adab o tasleemat! Ap ka mamnoon hooN keh apney hoSla afzayee farmayee. Dua go Akif Ghani Paris Beradaram Akif Saheb, Salam-o-Rehmat..!! Khubsoorat aur Dilkash Ghazal pe Daad hazir-e-khidmat hai Qobool karein. Maqta ka sher bahut hi achcha hai. Agar main usko aise padhoon to...

Khawar Sb, Sallam o dua! Yeh apki mohabbat hai keh ap ney meri ghazal ko pasand kiya.Mamnoon hooN. Khair andesh Akif Ghani MOHTARAM JANAB AKIF SAHEB, kahiaye kaise mizaaj haiN? aik aor khoobSoorat takhleeq par mirii taraf se bhi mubarakbaad qabool kijiaye. maqt'a sub ashaar se zyadaa mutaCir kun la...

Shumaila jee,
Adaab!
Ghazal ki pasandeedagi par shukarguzar hooN.
w.s
Akif Ghani

akifghani wrote:Yaran e UrduBandhan,
Adab o tasleemat!
ThoRey se waqfey key bad aj phir HaZir ho raha hooN apni aik ghazal ley kar.Apki raey mere liey mo'tbar hogi.
w.s
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Sara jee, salam o adab key bad apkey shukriey ka shukria ada karta hooN.Ghazal pasand ayee.Shukriya. w.s Akif Yaran e UrduBandhan, Adab o tasleemat! ThoRey se waqfey key bad aj phir HaZir ho raha hooN apni aik ghazal ley kar.Apki raey mere liey mo'tbar hogi. w.s Akif Ghani Malik [align=center][/ali...

Tahira Masood Sahiba,
Tasleemat o adab!
Nazm passand karney ka shukriya.Yeh apkay husn e zauq e nazar ka kamal hai.
w.s
Akif Ghani

Ateeq Bhayee,
Sallam o adab!
ajkal bas susti ka shikar hooa hooa hooN aur kam kam hee harkat meiN hooN.Meri nazm passand karney ka shukriya aur issi zameeN meiN apki nazm bhee tau kamal ki hai ma sha Allah.
w.s
Akif Ghani

Azeezan e Grami Qadr,
Assalam o allaikum!
Muharam ul Haram key hawaley se, Hazra Imam Haussain key nam aik nazm likhi thee pichley baras.Aap ki Khidmat meiN pesh kar raha hooN.Qabool kijey.
w.s
Akif Ghani

Sara J Sahiba,
Assalam o allaikum!
Ghazal ki pasandeedagi ka shukariya.Ijazat wali is meiN kon see baat hai.Agar apko pasand hai tau zaroor aisa kar leiN.
w.s
Akif Ghani

Janab e Najeeb SB,
Assalam o allaikum!
Ghazal pasand karney ka shukariya, umedd hai aienda bhee hosla afzai farmaeiN gey.
w.s
Akif Ghani Malik

najeeb wrote:Janab e Akif Aapki ghazal padhi. bahut pasand aayee. Maqta to laa jawaab hai. Dili mubarakbad pesh hai. Tashreef laate rahiyega.

Najeeb

Salem Bashwar SB?,
Sallam o adab!
Ghazal pasand karney ka shukariya
ws
Akif Ghani Malik

sbashwar wrote:Mohtaram Akif Sahib

Ghazal bohat achchi kahi aapne. #5 sheir bohat pasand ayaa.
Mubarakbaad aur daad qubool kijiye.
Shukria
Salem Bashwar

Qabil e qadr ahl e sukhan, Assalam o allaikum! Apni aik taza ghazal pesh kar raha hooN.Kaisee lagi, belag tabsurey ka intezar rahey Ga. W.S Akif Ghani Poet & Journalist 3 Place des Vergers 95140 Garges les Gonesse France +33-134530408 +33-650126174 akifghani@hotmail.com www.urdunagar.com

janab akifghani sahib aadaab aap ki Ghazal meiN khoob khayalaat haiN. daad qubool kijiye wese kuch muqaamaat par aap ke talaffuz ki bina par wazn khaarij ho raha hay. 1=she,r 1 ka pehla misr,a=saheeh lafz(nah) hota hay.aap ne (naaa)baandha hay 2= she,r 2 ka pehla misr,a=saheeh lafz(qadam) hota hay.a...