mohtaram janaab sarwar saahib aur mohtaram janaab nazir saahib:
aap donon ke jawaabaat aur tashree ke liye mamnoon hoon;bas yahii confusion door karni thii ki aaya yeh misra donon behron men theek hai;ma'aloom huwaa ki kuchh haalton men eik misraa do behron men yaksaan syllables ke saath use ho ...

MuHtarami
Zaamin SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aap ne likhkhaa hei:

kehte ho nah deN ge dil ham ne gar paRaa paayaa
dil kahaaN keh gum keeje ham ne mudd,a?a paayaa (Ghalib)

faa-i?-lun; mu-faa-e?e-lun; faa-i?-lun; mu-faa-e?e-lun
kehte ho; nah deN ge dil; ham ne gar; paRaa paayaa
212 ...

kehte ho nah deN ge dil ham ne gar paRaa paayaa
dil kahaaN keh gum keeje ham ne mudd,a?a paayaa (Ghalib)

faa-i?-lun; mu-faa-e?e-lun; faa-i?-lun; mu-faa-e?e-lun
kehte ho; nah deN ge dil; ham ne gar; paRaa paayaa
212;1222;212;1222
yahaan per 'kehte ho ' aur yakinan 'ham ne gar' 212 per hai


dil ...

mohtaram janaab nazir saahib:
asa
unfortunately mere pass arooz ki koii kitaab nahin hai;internet se hi jo kuchh parhaa hai,usii pe abhii tak iktifaa hai;men ne pritchett ki handbook dekhii per is behr ki koii ghazal unhon ne pesh nahin ki hai.
janaab sarwar saahib ke nikaat-e-sukhan men is ki yeh ...

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{ hazaj mu;samman ashtar } [hazaj mu;samman ashtar]

mohtaram janaab nazir saahib:

pritchett ki handbook men is behr ko[ya keh liijiye isi jaisi behr hai] ooper ke siigha men baandha gaya hai;merii naqis samaajh meN qaaide ke mutaabiq[mera samajhana ghalat ...

ek tarahi misre per merii koshish pesh-e-khidmat hai;apni araa dekar mamnooniyat ka mauqa dijiye
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Daane Dunke ke imtehaanoN mein
zindgi kaT gayii uRanoN mein

ik sakoot-e-qazaa bapaa ghar ke
dar-o-diiwaar aur dalaanoN mein

'izz-o-iimaaN, khariid lo kuchhh bhii ...

zara sa boojh parhta hai to pathar toot jaate haiN
na jaane boojh kitnaa, aadmi bardasht karte haiN

ujaale dekh kar aksar ghuta hai dam andheroN ka
andhere kab nisaab e raushni bardasht karte haiN

eik khoobsoorat kalaam,janaab mahtaab saahib

daad qabool farmaayein

zaamin

Munafey ki koii Surat nazar aati nah ho jismeN
KahaN ab dost aisee dostee bardaasht karte haiN

Khabar achchee sunaao per zaraa aahista aahista
BaRee mushkil se hum koii Khooshee bardaasht karte haiN

ManayeN kaise hum jashn.e saHar ab tum hi batlaao
Bawaqt.e subH baar.e teeragee bardaasht ...

biCHaR kar tujh say zindaa hain, yeh bas jabr-e-tanaffus hei,
kahaN jeetay hain! hum jo zindagii bardaSHt kartay hain.

6) mire lehjay ki talKHii ik kasouTii hai parakhnay ki,
[color]"jo ahl-e-Zarf hotay hain vohii bardaSHt kartay hain."[/c


eik achchii ghazal;ehsaas aur khayaal se arasta

daad ...

zaraa see zindagee kaa bojh uThaa paate na ham kaisee ?
diwaane baar-e-kooh-e-a'aashiqee bardaasht karte haiN !

4.

junooN waaloN se poochho i'shq maiN kaisee jiyaa jaaye
yehee to haiN jo har Gham baa Khushee bardaasht karte haiN !

5.

umeed-e-waSl tak baaqee nahiN dil maiN, jahaaN waalo ...

bahut khoobsoorat kalaam aap ki or se,mohtarama saara saahiba;
daad ke saath
mukhlis

zaamin

eik pur-tarranum,takhayyul aur taghazal se bherpoor aap ki yeh ghazal,ham sab naye seelkhane waalon ke liye ek mufaid sabaq kitarah hai.
meri aur se daad qabool farmaayein

zaamin

bahut khoobsoorat ghazal pesh ki,janaab muzaffar sahib

daad qabool farmaayein

zaamin

tarahi 16 pe merii yeh adnaa koshish pesh hai;umiid hai aap apnii ara se niaaz denge;shukren:
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raho aankhon ke muqaabil yeh to taqdeer nahin
kyaa mire dil meiN tire Husn ki taSveer nahiN?

dil-e-khush-fehm ko maqsood thii zulfon pe qadr
yeh na thaa waajeH na thaa maa’il-e-taskhiir ...

janaab badayunii sahib aur janaab nazir sahib;

jawaab ke liye mamnoon hoon;dar-asal sawall yeh nahin tha ka 112 ki jagah 1121 use ho sakta hai ya nahin,[is kii ijaazat ke baare mein mujhe maaloom thaa];balki yeh kih jo aakhir mein 1 izaafaa huaa hai ,kyaa voh sakin honaa chaahiye ya ke baa-harkat ...