gayaa daur-e-sarmaaya daari gayaa
tamaasha dikha ke madaari gayaa

tamaasha / gayaa

Zia saHib:

aadaab arz hai janaab :)

maashallah aap ne bahot khoob ghazal kahi hai, aur mazaameen bhi ache baaNdhe haiN .

Mohtaram Nazir sahib, aur Naheed saHiba to apni aaraa de hi chuke haiN :)

meri jaanib se sirf daad qubool kijiye :)

aur isi taraH likhte raheN :)

amjad

hai mujh pe taa'na zan khud mera aHsaas
tamanna apni qeemat kho rahi hai

khusha ye tarz-e-taa'zeem-e-mohabbat
ye taa'zeem-e-mohabbat ho rahi hai

gham-e-furqat ka shikva karne vaali
meri maujoodgi meiN so rahi hai :D :D

Jaun Eliya

meri / hai

thaa zindagi meiN maut ka khaTkaa lagaa hua
uRne se peshtar bhi miraa raNg zard tha

uRne / tha

jaise ham aadam-o-havva ki sazaa bhool gaye
varghalaate rahe jannat ke nazaare kiya kiya

varghalaate / kiya

Irfan bhai:

aap ki ye ghazal bahot pasand aayee :)

hamaari jaanib se daad qubool farmaaiye :)

amjad

ki mire qatl ke baad us ne jafaa se tauba
haaye us zood pashemaaN ka pashemaaN hona

gham agarche jaaN gusl hai pa bacheN kahaaN ke dil hai
gham-e-ishq agar na hota, gham-e-rozgaar hotaa

hotaa hai nihaaN gard meiNn sehraa mere hote
ghistaa hai jabeeN Khaak pe daryaa mere aage

ghistaa ya aage

ghalib

dekh to dil se ke jaaN se uThta hai
ye dhuaaN sa kahaaN se uThta hai

Meer

hooN garmi-e-nishaat-e-tasavvur se naghma saNj
maiN andaleeb-e-gulshan, na.aafreeda hooN

ghalib

uthaa ker toR Daala aaiina Husn-e-raqaabat se
wo kal is per bigaR baiThe ke ham sa doosra kyuN ho

yeh na thi hamaari qismat ke visaal-e-yaar hota
agar aur jeete rehte yehi intizaar hota

ghalib

de

de daad ae falak dil-e-Hasrat parast ko
haaN kuch na kuch talaafi-e-maafaat chaahiye

ghalib

hai

hai dil ke liye maut masheenoN ki Hukoomat
ahsaas-e-muravvat ko kuchal dete haiN aalaat

aHsaas ya aalaat :D