EK GAZAL: mat uTha apne aastaane se=G4

Post by **Star Mind** » Thu May 05, 2005 3:52 am

Najma SaaHiba, aadaab :)

janaab , aap ki konsee aisee Ghazal hai jo zehn-0-dil par qayaamat na Dhaati ho ?
aap ka jitnaa bhi kalaam abtak nazar se guzraa hai , ham Sirf masHoor hi hote rahe , aek aek she'ar dil maiN utar jaataa hai !!

aap ki ye Ghazal bhi qayaamat-khez hai !! , tamaam ash'aar hi Ghazab k haiN , meeri jaanib se daad qabool kejeye. shukriya

moKhliS: Zia Baloch

Post by **najma** » Thu May 05, 2005 11:43 pm

Mahtab Qadr wrote:waah waah Najma sahiba aapka aik aik sher murassa hai, aur aapki kuhnamashqi ka suboot bhi. bahut khooob .

janab mahtab qadr sahib!
assalam-o-alaikum
apki be-had mamnoon hooN.baRee baat hay ke jisi ko sabhi ash,aar pasand ajaeiN.ise maiN apka husn-e-nazar hi keh saktii hooN.
nawazish
khair andesh
najma

Post by **najma** » Wed May 11, 2005 8:33 am

Mahtab Qadr wrote:waah waah Najma sahiba aapka aik aik sher murassa hai, aur aapki kuhnamashqi ka suboot bhi. bahut khooob .

janab Mahtab Qadr sahib!
aapki is pazeeraaee ke liye ba-had mamnoon hooN.
sada khush rahiye

Post by **najma** » Wed May 11, 2005 8:37 am

Star Mind wrote:Najma SaaHiba, aadaab :)

janaab , aap ki konsee aisee Ghazal hai jo zehn-0-dil par qayaamat na Dhaati ho ?
aap ka jitnaa bhi kalaam abtak nazar se guzraa hai , ham Sirf masHoor hi hote rahe , aek aek she'ar dil maiN utar jaataa hai !!

aap ki ye Ghazal bhi qayaamat-khez hai !! , tamaam ash'aar hi Ghazab k haiN , meeri jaanib se daad qabool kejeye. shukriya

moKhliS: Zia Baloch

zia baloch sahib!
is qadar bhi naheeN huzoor

aap jaante haiN ke ham to abhi tifl-e=maktab haiN.zara kuch seekh leN, zara kuch hunar ajaey, tab aap kahiyye.
zia!
aapki is bhar-pur hausla afzaaee ke liye ham be-had mamnoon haiN.
sada khush rahiye

little abbasi · Post by **little abbasi** » Wed May 11, 2005 9:09 am

SALA/\/\.

BOHAT KHOOB HAI JI YA POST AAP KI

ATTIQ ABBASI

Post by **najma** » Wed May 11, 2005 9:13 am

little abbasi wrote:SALA/\/\.

BOHAT KHOOB HAI JI YA POST AAP KI

ATTIQ ABBASI

shukriya attiq
khush raho

Post by **khurram_shaikh** » Wed May 11, 2005 4:16 pm

najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.

W salaam,

waah waah bahoot khoob najma baaji kyaa ghazal share ki hai apnien bahoot umdeh aise hi apnien behtreen aur dilkash kalaam humse share kerti rahaa karien aur daad leti rahien khush rahien sada apnien kharchey per

Post by **najma** » Mon May 16, 2005 12:07 am

khurram_shaikh wrote:
najma wrote:sathiyo
aadaab
tarahii ghazal g/4 k saath hazir hooN.asaatizah ki aa,raa, ki muntazir rahoongii.

W salaam,

khurram

((waah waah bahoot khoob najma baaji kyaa ghazal share ki hai apnien bahoot umdeh))
bohat bohat shukriya meri ghazal pasand aae.

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((aise hi apnien behtreen aur dilkash kalaam humse share kerti rahaa karien aur daad leti rahien khush rahien sada apnien kharchey per

))

sirf apne hi kharche kyuuN?

tumhare pe kyuuN naheeN?

kya behnoN ka haq naheeN hota?

sada khush raho

Post by **najma** » Tue May 31, 2005 11:20 am

Star Mind wrote:Najma SaaHiba, aadaab :)

janaab , aap ki konsee aisee Ghazal hai jo zehn-0-dil par qayaamat na Dhaati ho ?
aap ka jitnaa bhi kalaam abtak nazar se guzraa hai , ham Sirf masHoor hi hote rahe , aek aek she'ar dil maiN utar jaataa hai !!

aap ki ye Ghazal bhi qayaamat-khez hai !! , tamaam ash'aar hi Ghazab k haiN , meeri jaanib se daad qabool kejeye. shukriya

moKhliS: Zia Baloch

zia baloch sahib!

addaab

ye sab aapki zarrah-nawazii hay huzuur

bohat shukriya

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