seedhay saadhay lafzoN meiN humnay baat pahunchaanay kee
kaushish kee hai.is say muraad zamaanaye haal hai.
Mujhay abhe tak is micray mein `nazar` ka istemal kuch ajeeb sa lagta hay magar beharhal is ke eik assan se sorat bhe hosakte hay

haiN kawakub kuch nazar atay haiN kuch
dete haiN ...

Adaab Shummu Ji,Ap jaisse Azeem shaira mere Pehle tukbande paRh he lete tu buhut tha magar ap ney tu mere sathal Ghazal ka tajzeya bhe kar deya.Buhut buhut shukirya

bard wrote:


Sunna hay kay wo mere ghar aa rahe hain
Na pane pay maqsood ham pa rahe hain


ahem ahem achha
Shu Shu Shkriya ...

KAROUDON=CRORES
Durrust farmaya Ap ney Shummu Ji,ab ap say behac ke mujh mein tab nahi.Sirf guzarish hay kay banda bhe `karoRon` he samjha tha magar Urdu shaeri mein `nazar ana`say murad hote hay wo cheez jo sirf zahire tor par nazar ayay par assal mein wo na ho.

jis simt bhii dekhuun nazar ...

Adaab Sara Sahiba.
Nawazish,bahut shukriya.
Yahan kalam parhnay kay leyay member hona lazme hay tu mein sirf parhnay wala he member hon keyonkay yahan zeyada tar loog persian script mein kalam post kartay hain aur Urdu parhnay ka assal lutf tu isse mein hay.Baad mein har forum par rashid_166 ka ...

Adaab Haamid Sahib,
Hameesha ke tarah ek aur nehaet umda sabaq amoz kalam.
gaye tum say pehlay haiN jitnay bhi insaaN
kiya jo yahaaN per wohi paa rahay haiN

Magar kuch rehnumae chaeyay the . `karaudoN` say ap ke murad koraidna hay?
karaudoN jo insaaN nazar aa rahay haIN
ajal ki taraf yeh ...

Adaab Bard jee...Sab se pehle to aap ka bahut sukriya jo aapne hamare kehne pe is tarahi misre pe ghazal likhi aur khoob likhi,,,guzaarish hai ke aap ROMAN mein bhi ghazal post kar dein taakeh hum sheron ko quote karke apni raaye de sakein..shukriya...aur han khushaamadeed bzm mein:)

wAdaab ...

Bard Sahib/Sahiba

sub say pahlay to moazrat khah hoon kah mairi kam ilmi kah amin aap ka naam pooree taraha nahien sumjh rahi ,kuch wazahat farma dain to aaindah moshkil nah paish aa,ay gee .
baharhaal aap ki mamnoon hoon aur shukriya adda kartee hoon .

Rehana Ji,
Ghazal mein gender say ...

Muzaffir Sahib, Ek uljhan c the zehan mein girah kay barey mein jo ap ney rafa karde.Shukrya.English mein shaire yon bhe assan hay kay kae rhyming dictionaries online hain.Hamein bhe chahyay kay eik dictionary banaein jis mein tamam radeef aur qafiay online mil jaein,is say nayay likhnay walon ko ...

Mohtram Muntazim e Ala Janab Muz^affar A Muz^affar Sahib
wAdaab aur nawazish
Itna mufuzil tajzeyay aur dad kay leyay buhut shukrya.
Agarchay Urdu mere madre azaban hay magar jaissa kay nick say zahir hay, mein English mein he shaire karta tha magar eik sal pehlay ek doost ke waja say Urdu shairy ...

Aadaab,
Apne ek tukbundi ap ke khidmat mein peesh kar raha hoon.