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zindagi ham teray khwaaboN se rahay sharminda
aur tu hay ke sada aaiina khaanay maaNgay

Azeezan-e-Urdu Bandhan
Adaab

Taaza ghazal ke saath haazir hua hooN, aap ke aaraa ka shiddat se intizaar rahay ga, umeed hay apni besh qeemat raaye se zaroor nawazaiN ge.

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed

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GHAZAL

sang hawa ke khel rachana ...

yaadoN ki jaReN phooT hi paRti haiN kaheeN se
dil sookh bhi jata hay to banjar naheeN hota

Mohtaram Abdullah Nazir Sahib
Adaab

Aap ki ghazal paRhnay ka itifaaq hua aur Janab aap ki ghazal bohat pasand aai. Aap ki ghazal saadgi maiN purkari ki behtrareen micaal hay, Bohat see daad qabool kijay. Darj zel ash'aar ziada pasand aaye.

yaad itnaa hei raat kaT nah sakee
talkhiy-e-intizaar ...

Khawar Bhai

Adaab

Aap ki nazm achhi lagi, is ki khas baat is ki be sakhtagi hay,

Khush rahiay,

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed.

Yaaraan e Urdu Bandhan
Adaab o Taslimaat

Aik ghazal ke saath hazir hua hoon, Aap ki aara aur tabsaray ka intezaar rahay ga.

Mukhlis
Muhammad Ahmed

GHAZAL

1.
Hijr kitna, wisaal kitna tha
Kaar-e-dil main ma’aal kitn tha

2.
RaHataiN kitni dil lagi se theeN
Dil lagi ka vabaal kitna tha

3 ...

Praise

Azeezaan e Mehfil
Taslimaat

Aik taaza ghazal aap sab ki nazar kar raha hooN, hamesha ki taraH aap ki aara aur tabsaray ka shiddat se intezaar rahay ga.

Mukhlis
Muhammad Ahmed

GHAZAL

hawa tufan hay, aandhi bapa hay, deep jalta hay
Pighalti hay hatheli dekhiay kab din nikalta hay

purani ...

Mohtaram Razi Bhai
Adab,

Umeed hay ba kairiyat hooN ge, aap ki nazm paRhi aur bohat pasand aai, aap ne is nazm mian ahsaasat ko bohat mulaim bunat ka jama pehnaya hay, is khush rang poshaak nazm per meri janib se mubarakbad qabool kejay, daad hazir hay,

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed

gurez karta hai aane se mere KhwaaboN meiN
woh shaKhs jo miri neendeiN uRaa gaya akcar

Mohtaram Danish Bhai
Adab

Ghazal pasand aai, khas ker darj bala shair,

daad hazir hay,

mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed.

tahira Masood wrote:moHteram

tasleemat

daad qabuul fermeeiN

regards

Bohat Shukria Tahira

Aap ki pazeerai ka

Main had mamnoon hoon

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed.

Bahut Khoob Mohammed Ahmad Saheb. Daad Qubool karein. Ghazal bahut pyari hai.... khaas kar ye sher....

Harf o maa'ni ke jangal miaN titli ban jana
LafzoN ke asraar miaN rehna accha lagta hay

Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyada.

aap ka mukhlis,

armaan

Janab Munir Arman Nasimi Sahib
Adab ...

Azeezan e Bazm
Taslimat

Aik ghazal le kar aap ki bazm main hazir hua hooN, umeed hay pasand aaygi, aap ki aaraa aur taacurrat ka shidat se intizar rahay ga.

Mukhlis
Muhammad Ahmed

GHAZAL

1.
Dar ho kar dewaar maiN rehna achha lagta hay
YoN hi teray pyar miaN rehna accha lagta hay

2 ...

muHtaram janaab Ahmed SaaHib!
assalamOlaikuM

Wa Alaikum Assalam

sab se pehle to aap apne is jumle peh meree taraf se daad qubool keejiye

Urooz ki ye ghaltioN iss baar acchhi lagiN kioN ke agar urooz ki ye ghaltiaN na hoti to main is rehnumai se bhi mehroom rehta.

ab kuCh Ghazal ke ...

mukarramee Muhammad Ahmad SaaHeb:aadaab!

aap kee yeh jadeed raNg kee Ghazal achh`ee lagee. maZ^aameen meN nudrat hai aur bayaan meN taazagee. meree daad HaaZ^ir hai. qubool farmaa,iYe! shuriyah!

Ghazal par tafSeel se guftgoo kaa mauqa'h naheeN hai. haaN do (2) maqaamaat kee t^araf aap kee ...

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sang hawa ke khel rachana bhool gaye

Re: aek saadah see taazah ghazal- -- - Abdullah Nazir.

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HAWA TUFAN HAY, AANDHI BAPA HAY, DEEP JALTA HAY, GHAZAL

Dar ho kar dewaar maiN rehna achha lagta hay