Dosto bahut saal baad yaha aana hua, maufee chahta hoon , ek nayi ghazal le kar haazir hua hoo, ek dum simple si hai...kuchh dino pehle raste se jaa raha tha to sadak/ raste par gulab pada mila , maine utha liya aur kuchh likha hai, Gaur farmaiyega ...

shukriya nafeesa jee aap ka.

Dosto.n kaafee arse ke baad ek ghazal paise-khidmat mai hai, behr kuchh is tarah hai 1222/1222/1212. insallah pasand aaye to qubool farmaiyega, aur ye naacheez aap ki raay ka muntziir bhi rahega agar koi ghalti bhi nazar aaye to bataaiyega zaroor Meri aankkho me jo chhuupe savaal hain Mahobbat ka ...

Zakhm bhar jaaye magar kyun dard yeh jata nahee Vaqt ke kyun ghaanv marham koii bhar pata nahee Husn chhal hai,ek bh’ram hai bas nazar ka,ishq men Chaut khaane par bhi kyun sach yeh nazar aata nahi Umrabhar maine bahaaye ashq ke dariyaa kaii Yaad men jis kii, vo mere zakhm sehlaata nahi jab se m ...

Salam 'azeezan, aek mukhtalif andaaz ki koshish Haazir e khidmat hai aor aap ki raa-aye ki ashad zaroorat hai. Khawar. 1. kyooN na ham aaj se har baat pe mucbat socheN in badalte huway Haalat pe mucbat socheN 2. ham bhalaa janeN hi kyaa taaqat e parwaz abhi din nikal aa-aye agar raat pe mucbat ...

Assalam-o-alaikum, aek nazm jo apne haaliya safar ke tassuraat per likhi. Nazam.........!! "Deccan" ki bahaareiN vo gali koocha o bazaar bachpan ki sabhi yadeN huuweeN taza phir ik baar abaad ghar aadha tha tou veeraaN bhi tha aadhaa deevaareN sisaktee huwee veeraan sa kamraa awaaz mere Abbi ki ...

Urdubandhan ke sabhii dosto.N ko manu kaa aadaab. Aaj badi muddat ke baad kuchh likhane ka man banaaya hai,aur vp bhi apni ek puraani kaavisih ko ghazal men tabdiil kar ke piash kar raha hoon.Aap sabhee dosto.N se iltiijaa hai kii is ghazal ko padh kar apnii qeemati raay se ise nawaaze.Maine is ...

Urdubandhan ke sabhii dosto.N ko manu kaa aadaab. Aaj badi muddat ke baad kuchh likhane ka man banaaya hai,aur vp bhi apni ek puraani kaavisih ko ghazal men tabdiil kar ke piash kar raha hoon.Aap sabhee dosto.N se iltiijaa hai kii is ghazal ko padh kar apnii qeemati raay se ise nawaaze.Maine is ...

moHtaram Manu SaaHib tasleemaat! :-) Aap kee Ghazal jo keh aap ke jazbaat aor dard kee nishaandahee kar hai. achchee koshish hai. yeh Ghazal jaesa keh aap jaante haiN keh beHer-e-ramal mucammin meHZoof meN kahee gaee hai. ya'nee mucammin hone kee wajah se is ke kul aaTh arkaan huwe. aor is Hawalah ...

manu ji, adaab aur naya saal mubarak, ghazal pasand aayi kuch shair to dil ko chuu gaye. daad qubool keejiye aur zor e qalam aur ziyada. sara Sara jee aap ne is kalaam par aa kar, ise padh kar aur pasand kar ke mujhe jo hosala-afsaayi dii hai us ke liye aap ka mamnoon hoon maiN. Dar'asal is ghazal ...

bahoot khoob ghazal kahii hai haamid jee, dil ki gehraayiyo se mubarakbaad qubool kareN khas kar yeh ashara kuchh jyada hee pasnda aaye,aur dil ke kareeb rahe. maiN andheray ka makaaN hooN rauz kehti hai zameeN bankay insaaN aa, tira raushan makaaN haujaayega aadmi laakhoN haiN haamid,haiN yahaaN ...

aada'b dosto.N aaj qaafee vaq^t baad yahaa.N aana hu_aa hai,Vaqt kee paabanddi kii vajah se likhane ka mauka nahee milta phir bhi apne jazbaatoN ko ghazal ke dhaa.nche me.n Dhaal kar phir is mehfil me.n haazir hu_aa hoon.mai.N ummid kartaa hoon ki aap sab ki ashaaon par khara utar sakoo.n. Meri har ...

Manish jee: aadaab aur namaste! mujh ko afsos hai keh maiN is se pehle naheeN likh sakaa. har jagah kee har cheez dekh naheeN saktaa aur dekh bhee looN to likhnaa mumkin naheeN hai. phir doosree meHfiloN se bhee dost likhne ko kehte haiN yaa iSlaaH aur madad maaNGte haiN. Khair mujh se jo ho saktaa ...

Post kii gayi ghazal modified hai , yaani ghaltiyaa sudhaar kar fir se likhi hui hai.

raay ka muntzir hoon

regards
manu

Manu jee: namaste! maiN kal hee Europe ke safar se waapas aayaa hooN. aap kee Ghazal aur us par dostoN ke Khat^ bhee dekhe. taqreeba" sab baateN in dostoN ne dekh hee lee haiN lekin maiN ne sochaa keh maiN bhee kuchh likh dooN. ho saktaa hai keh is se koyee nayee baat nikal aaYe aur nah bhee niklee ...