Salam Muzaffar Sabhi. muje iss bazm meiN khushaamdeed kehne par shukriya kabool farmaye. Aap ne farmaya, Guzarish 23 ke teHet aap kee Ghazal naz^ar nawaaz hoee jo keh ham sab ke liYe musarrat ka bae,ic hai. mujh~e sabh~ee she'er pasand aaeY haiN. aap ka andaaz-e-paYan munfarid aor dilpazeer hone ke...

Salam Sara Ji, bila shubaa aap ki ye ghazal khoobsoorat khayalat oar dilkash izhaar ka majmooa hei. laikin iss shair ki khasoosi tareef na karnaa shaid naa insaafi ho. kabhi jo aapke tewar zaraa badalte heiN khabar kise hei jo Saara kaa Haal houtaa hei bohat saada se alfaaz meiN ye bay saakta izhaa...

Muzaffar sb tasleemat. Yaad ehl-e-zindaaN ko aaee jab gulistaaN kee "dh~ajjiYaaN uRa deeN haiN apne hee garibaaN kee" Ahle zindaaN ko gulistaaN ki yaad dilaa kar aap ne khoob manzaar baandha hei. dushmanoN se kiya karte ham gilah a'dawat ka? dostooN ne luTee hai aabru gulistaaN kee. iss s...

Janab Hamid Baaqri Sabhi Tasleemat !!! Aap ka makhsoos rang obhat pasand ayaa. oar khasoosun ye wala shair, [colo=blue]aao fikr karle.n hum, aakhirat kay saamaa.n ki chaar din ki hauti hai, zindagi har insaa.n kee [/color] . bohat hi khooob naseehat amoz bayaan hei. Allah kare zor e qalam oar ziada...

Tamam hi ehbaab ko tasleemat iss waqt meiN apne aap ko bohat hi khush qismat mehsoor kar rahaa hooN ke zindigi meiN pehli baar kissi mehfil, ya moshairay meiN apni ghazal paish karne ja raahaa. oar Anjuman bhi aisi ke jis par asaataza e karam apni nazar keeaye huway haiN. agar ehle adab itne bari s...

Mohtaram Janab Abudullah Nazir Sb ke leeaye Aap ne seekhne kaa jo raastah ikhtiyaar kiyaa hei wo aapkaa apnaa hei. Aap uske moojid heiN. Her shakhS ko Haq hei ke kisi ke bataaye houe raastaoN per chale yaa khud apne raaste per chalkar bhaTaktaa rahe yaa manzil tak pahounch jaaye. [/color] Shaid muj...

words for next shair,

log----- gayaa.

meiN akaila hi chala thaa janib e manzil magar,
log saath aate ga-aye oar karwaaN bantaa gayaa.

"umr e daraaz maang kar laa-aye thay chaar din
do arzoo meiN kut ga-aye do intezaar meiN

Mayank sahib, mein khud bilkul nauwarid hooN. meri ra-aye ki koi ahmiat nahi. aik oar baat kehtaa chalooN. Aik dunya Mcdonald ke burger ki shaidai hei. Laikin woh mujhe pasand nahi. iss ka ye matlab nahi ke woah ghazaiat ke aitbaar se bilkul naa kara ho ga. bus har shakhs ka apna apna mizaaj hota h...

Mohtaram Jawaid Sahib ke leeaye [/red] Sir barwaqt nishandahi par meiN aap ka bhi teh e dil se shukar guzar hooN. Mujhe aapke garNqadr tabsarey per koii e'traaz nahiN. Yeh aap ka haq hai. Sir yaqeen janiaye meiN tabsara bilkul nahi kar rahaa tha Sarwar Raz SaHab ka mizaj kuch aisa hai ke woh tanqee...

Mohtaram Sarwar Raaz Sahib ke leeaye [/red] Sir, Mien aap ki tahmmul mazaji par be intehaa shukr guzaar hooN. aap ke uThaaYe huwe nikaat ke jawaab dene kee koshish kartaa hooN. Sir meiN ne har giz oar har giz nakaat naheeN uthaa-aye the. sirf nikaat ki vazaahaat chahi thii ke mujh jaise koRh maghaz...

teal] Sir aap ki hadayat sir aakhoaN par. Bus aap se aik darkhaast hei, mujhe naa-ahal samjhiaye. naa laaique samjhiaye, bay aqal samjhiaye, laa ilm samjhiaye. Laikin badtameez na samjhiaye. Sir aik baat ki vazhat karaiN toa mazeed mashkoor hooN gaa. aap ne likha Aapka muTaaliAah waseeA hougaa tou ...